I made this poem to express my feelings, and I wanna shout to the whole world that I will never ever give up. no matter how hard the situation that I've encountered
A fat girl who got bullied, depressed finally got her life together for a year. And she finally proofed it to her best friend who always picked on her every single day about something that she just realised that day.
How does if feel to die? Questions that the living always ask, or why are we living, no doubt I too ask myself this sometimes, but today people are brought back to life and some die, as a sacrifice to bring back the living, how they use their...
One sided love,
Living with the memories of the girl ,...
First let me introduce the character of the story..
My name is CHRISTOPER and iam working as a COP In L.A.....
Am still here by this corner, twisting side to side.
Time, Hours, Days have gone by....
3 COMMENTS
manelyn
June 5, 2015 - 17:04 Except for some minor grammar issues, you really took me with the emotion in your poem. Whatever you are going through, you certainly can overcome it because of your spirit! Keep going and keep on writing... :)Icadz
June 6, 2015 - 03:54 Thank you, and God BlessManahill Naik
July 30, 2015 - 13:05 i completely agree with manelyn.. some minimal grammar probs but still u instilled loads of emotion in it :D keep up