I made this poem to express my feelings, and I wanna shout to the whole world that I will never ever give up. no matter how hard the situation that I've encountered
A fat girl who got bullied, depressed finally got her life together for a year. And she finally proofed it to her best friend who always picked on her every single day about something that she just realised that day.
There is a garden,
In the hands of Orden
There are beautiful flowers…...
About a boy who struggle through accusations .a very bad circumstances.
DEAR READERS: Before you read this, turn on this song while reading it along (paste (LINK)>>>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lq2ANOkfsIA
3 COMMENTS
manelyn
June 5, 2015 - 17:04 Except for some minor grammar issues, you really took me with the emotion in your poem. Whatever you are going through, you certainly can overcome it because of your spirit! Keep going and keep on writing... :)Icadz
June 6, 2015 - 03:54 Thank you, and God BlessManahill Naik
July 30, 2015 - 13:05 i completely agree with manelyn.. some minimal grammar probs but still u instilled loads of emotion in it :D keep up