Aloft the giblerry plains stood a tower old
Avoided by many even warriors bold
Owner died of plague or so I have been told
Now it stands abandoned and also very cold
Tale which I share ‘bout dame called Marie
Near the old tower she knew not to be wary
For sky was pounding and ground was muddy
Ancient tower seemed all dry and merry
Ah Luna’s grace I’ve found me a shelter
Majestic stonework sure seems better
Who left these bags as if they didn’t matter
Could they be blessings to sate my hunger
Roof looks strong and the ground clear
Why would any man leave here
Plains are wide and ground fertile
Why would any man leave here
Marie remembered not to be humbled
No owner in leagues she mumbled
Without me tower may crumble
How lucky here I stumbled
As she slept alone under the old tower
Over green plains and hills she hovered
Warmth hugged her from cold he covered
In blissful sleep her stamina she recovered
Come the morning Marie felt overjoyed
Though of leaving left her devoid
But her stay she did enjoyed
Maybe I should stay she thought…
Her mind started racing
Her heart filled with joy
Yes she could stay some more
Jollity and hope
Oh bliss such bliss
To live away would feel amiss
Atop the tower she started dancing
Muffled footsteps while ignoring
Songs of praise for blessed plains
Sang Marie as he danced and hopped
Of all the songs one song remains
The song of Giblerry plains
Marie sung atop her lungs
No one to hear but one
She slowly calmed down
Front of figure unknown
Her hopes she did remembered
As all her dreams crumbled
Trying to walk she fumbled
A dark figure behind hungered
Plains stood no longer green
Tower looked bleak and mean
Dead bodies covered the plain
Her heart forgot to beat
Her hands cold as stone
Her eyes shined no longer
Her feet crawled across the floor
Cold she was as she walked to gibbet
Green plains still in decay
Nothing lasts forever so…
She would better die
Took quite a while her death
Her pretty neck did not relent
Hope may entropy but death
Death is eternal my dearest
Shade tall and handsome whispered
Whispers of love she never had
Before her eyes closed Plains turned
Beholding its beauty Marie ended
Giblerry plains stood ever green
Without whisper or a bark
Folk avoided its lure for it had a master
Jolly as man can be yet sinister
Took lives for joy in life…
Why would he stop now?
9 COMMENTS
Dravench
May 21, 2015 - 02:58 Oh wow what a tragic ending. It's so sad though! Why would that man just kill such a happy girl? Urgh lol wow this poem gave me goosebumps. Keep it going!! This is sooooo good! I really love poems...especially this one.Manahill Naik
May 21, 2015 - 09:48 wowwwww 0.0 this was really different than the usual stuff round here,, amazing n keep up.. nice start so welcome to typotic :D :DMahoobee
May 21, 2015 - 10:58 Nicely written. Welcome to typotic, Immortal-san. :DManahill Naik
May 21, 2015 - 12:28 lol.. :D :DMahoobee
May 21, 2015 - 15:10 Haha. :DManahill Naik
May 22, 2015 - 08:57 nahh he no immortal suzume!! he is mobydick the annoying bear.. he freaked out abby i swear :P :PMahoobee
May 22, 2015 - 09:00 hahaha. mobydick, lol. Poor abby. :D :DManahill Naik
May 22, 2015 - 09:03 Ikr!! but anyway he's cool :P :PMahoobee
May 22, 2015 - 09:08 Hahaha. It seems so :D