Don't go away....
This poem is about a poet who is afraid of losing a woman he has invested all his love. The poet is me....
Don't go away....
by Teddy KimathiIt can’t be compared to missing your kiss
You are not an ordinary woman in my life
Going away will cut my heart like a knife
Always remember you are the reason I live
Everything in life makes sense because of your love
I know you have been hurt by my secrets
All my past has left me with regrets
You are the reason that I live today
Please, forgive me; let’s make a new day
A new beginning with you is all I want
You are the most wonderful woman I have ever met
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- Dec, 19 2015
- Science Fantasy Science Fiction
31 COMMENTS
Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 14:43 niceeee :DTeddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 14:57 Thank you for your well wishes Manahil! ;-)Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 14:59 ofccc.. best of luck teddy :)Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 15:00 where r u from btw?Teddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 15:01 I am from Kenya in Africa.Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 15:02 i see. and ur profile says uve published ur poems and stuff rite?Teddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 15:03 Yes, I have.Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 15:04 cooolll o.o i seeTeddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 15:06 Thanks! ;-) It's not easy though - it takes lots of practice to appear there....Manahill Naik
August 1, 2015 - 15:07 god ure kinda scaring me.. but well i have a long way to goooo :PTeddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 15:18 Lol. Don't be scared. First, believe in yourself. Second, practice. You'll know your progress by joining sites like poetrysoup, which host contests, and anyone can comment on your work. If you realize you are doing good, submit your works to loads of literary sites. There is a journal I sent works five times, being rejected. The sixth time, a work of mine was accepted! ;-)Manahill Naik
August 2, 2015 - 12:45 wow now thats a total boost up.. im gonna watch out for that site today surely.. tenks so much :)Teddy Kimathi
August 2, 2015 - 14:07 You are very much welcome! *^_^*Mahoobee
August 1, 2015 - 14:44 So sweet and nicely done. Good luck :)Teddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 14:58 Thank you for your well wishes and enjoying my work Mahoobee! ;-)Teddy Kimathi
June 10, 2017 - 10:46 Thank you so much for your continuous morale support Mahoobee!! *^__^* I don't know how I bounced your comment, sorry....koyaai
August 1, 2015 - 15:17 How should I put this. It feels like a lovestruck teenager wrote this piece because it feels so raw and real.Teddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 15:23 Thanks Koyaai. I can see you are so analytical......I took it in a teenagers' point of view! I remember in high school a guy took overdose of drugs, because his girlfriend had left him. That event changed my way of thinking about love, and what true love really is. My love poems were born from such observations.koyaai
August 1, 2015 - 16:06 That sounds like great material. Remember that being raw can be good or bad so try to identify when it's favorable or not.Teddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 16:17 True my friend. Wise words...sheelsdevi
August 1, 2015 - 16:17 A very touching poem of getting in terms with the separation.nice workTeddy Kimathi
August 1, 2015 - 16:19 Thank you for enjoying my work and commenting on it Sheelsdevi! ;-)Vishnumayaa
August 1, 2015 - 17:21 This poem is too touchy , romantic and I guess you have written something about a break - up to....anyways ALL THE BEST .Teddy Kimathi
August 2, 2015 - 14:09 Thank you for enjoying my work and your well-wishes Vishnumayaa! ^_^celestialmind
August 2, 2015 - 16:12 Hongera Teddy & Don't worry, everyone knows Kenya ;D....I think. Niiice piece!Teddy Kimathi
August 3, 2015 - 07:38 Asante sana Celestialmind! :-) Hahaha..... You are right. Everyone knows Kenya. ;-)Velantra
October 6, 2015 - 15:22 Wow, I really like your work. It is like we are in the same "space - place". Feel like I know you. One question? Do you still have your muse?Teddy Kimathi
October 6, 2015 - 15:58 Thanks for enjoying my work Velantra! :-) Sometimes intuitions fuse with writing. Yes, I still my muse...... *^_^*purpletears
July 29, 2016 - 15:49 So sweet! Nice one!Teddy Kimathi
July 30, 2016 - 07:51 Thank you so much, Purpletears!! ;-)pies11
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