Be aware she is only tempting you to her dungeon, so dark,
"He looked at me, it was as if his eyes were blood red. She looked half drunk, a hunger in her eyes as if she wanted to devour me… right there!"
This story is about starting over, when the one you love pass away.
This story is dedicated to the friends I made on Typotic, especially: Ejay, Sharmishtha and Samewriter, who allowed me to use their work. Also to everyone else reading it, I hope you enjoy it!
it is about my birthday - 5 January Booooringggg...............
Dedicated to my Sister who passed away recently and my brother who had to say goodbye to his young wife
6 COMMENTS
LUIS K.
November 21, 2015 - 11:47 Valantra, i enjoyed the poem, nicely pennedVelantra
November 21, 2015 - 12:26 Thank you very much, I always appreciate your feedback. And thanks for the upvotebodystringer
November 21, 2015 - 19:16 Yip, a woman can pull a large ship off it's course and strand it on a shallow reef :-)Lea Ebio
November 23, 2015 - 08:11 nice work Velantra! You made it sound dark and intriguing indeed and fascinating..plus, I like the way you rhymed it..keep it up friendVelantra
November 23, 2015 - 15:03 thank you very much for the compliment and up vote xxpies11
October 2, 2019 - 14:50 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)