Dancing with the devil

by Velantra
You think she is fragrantly and beaming,
You think she is joyfully tempting,
She is not an angel, my dear,
You are dancing with a devil; it is clear.

Do not let her consume you up,
Do not let her nurture your heart,
She is not a woman to lust,
She is a stranger, she has an icy-cold heart.

She will bring you cold wine, even flowers for a man like you,
Be aware she is only tempting you to her dungeon, so dark,
That woman is the devil; listen! a fool is you!
She only desire after your will, your spark!

Do not let her consume you dear,
Let her feel an emotionless heart,
Let her be the one breathing in fear,
Let her be the one to perish my dear.
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LUIS K.

LUIS K.

November 21, 2015 - 11:47 Valantra, i enjoyed the poem, nicely penned
Velantra

Velantra

November 21, 2015 - 12:26 Thank you very much, I always appreciate your feedback. And thanks for the upvote
bodystringer

bodystringer

November 21, 2015 - 19:16 Yip, a woman can pull a large ship off it's course and strand it on a shallow reef :-)
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

November 23, 2015 - 08:11 nice work Velantra! You made it sound dark and intriguing indeed and fascinating..plus, I like the way you rhymed it..keep it up friend
Velantra

Velantra

November 23, 2015 - 15:03 thank you very much for the compliment and up vote xx
pies11

pies11

October 2, 2019 - 14:50 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)

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