I love the connection to the scarf. Very spooky. It gave me chills!

No problem! I know a good story when I see one!

Thanks, I will work on being more clear next time!

Thanks, it means alot to me!

He was entranced by the "fun" of the circus like the other freaks were. Thanks by the way!

A little confusing at first, but once you get the hang of it, the story is really awesome!

A little more detail would have been a little helpful, but overall amazing!

I really liked it but a little more description would have greatly benifited it

Woah, that was intense. It was a little confusing at first but it straightened out at the end.

I really enjoyed the ending very unexpected!

It was a little slow at first, but when it got into the main plot it was really nice.

Thanks bud!

Thanks!

Leave a comment if you want chapter two!

Thank you! I wanted to leave a strong message, and I think I did!

A heartbroken woman is not a logical one.

loved your story. Can't wait for chapter two!

Nt one of my favorite works, I did pretty poorly. Leave me a comment about how you feel.

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