Very intriguing story.Romance giving way to passion.some what like "Fifty Shades of Grey"..Very interesting.

Nupur..beautiful work.the self explanatory way in which you have driven home a message for the unruly lifestyle of the modern youth, is appreciable...Its moral in other words is " always save for the rainy day" Nice work

A different way of imagining indeed.hilarious and at the same time interesting.

Thanks Mahoobee

Hi dear neighbour Mahoobee

Thanks Mahoobee.It was great getting such a wonderful comment for my story

It is a well written sentimental piece.But a little precise with the emotions .

Such beautiful realistic piece. I wish I really knew what he typed all day.But the vague way you mentioned it is in a way adding flavour to the story.very good read indeed.

Dear Velantra, yes that is how it happens in normal course.But I had to make a story out of those simple images. Story means imagination.More strange the imagination more captivating it can get.thanks for your wonderful.comment.

Thanks for your comments .I.will peruse well the next time.

It is eerie interesting but a little vague.But you have made it a point to make the readers sit up.

It is indeed a wonderful.work ..well written and very interesting .But you could have gone a bit easy on words.But I enjoyed it thoroughly.

It started off with some mystery and raised hairs..but what happened ultimately.the climax is slightly vague..still.a.good try.

Thanks for your wonderful and encouraging vote ,sudha

Thanks koyaai for your advice and appreciation.As you said I went through my story in search of errors.Sorry to say that I couldn't find any .And as for comas and exclamations .Well,that is a must to drive in a point.A misplaced coma or lack of it can change the meaning of a sentence altogether. Thanks once again for appreciating my work .

Wow ..that was a very touching story ..romantic and heart warming ..I thoroughly enjoyed ..

thanks a lot ,manelyn

Thanks a lot for your lovely ,encouraging comment ,friend