a lovely romantic poem.. excellent piece

a lovely romantic poem.. exellent piece

A very captivating story, i loved every bit of this story

Wonderful composition, keep penning and bringing those tales to life

a lovely romantic poem

A good write teddy.. intriguing..

Thanks so much Sharmishta for reading and appreciating my story

Sad poem about the problems in Nigeria.. with boko haram and the rest.. its my prayer that this great nation will claim its splendour once more

I loved the story.. i choose to see it as a young boy going through the rebellious phase, and a mum wanting the best for him.. a very valid story

A good story with a good ending, it captivated me to the very end also the delivery was vivid and full of emotion.. i loved it

Engrossing and tense read, also very captivating

part two of dark desire is really good and the suspense is killing me.. talk of a serial killer

I enjoyed reading part 1, of the dark desire its so captivating and wonderfully written..

lovely poem you have penned here, i love its relaxed mood

Thanks Teddy for appreciating am honored by the compliments and encouragement

Thanks Velantra, for appreciating this story// ***gracious***

Valantra, i enjoyed the poem, nicely penned

A well written story, i enjoyed reading it and was left asking for more

Teddy an intriguing story you have written here, i love the nice twist at the end

A great story teddy, with a good plot and plot development, keep them coming

Thanks Velantra for appreciating my stories... am honored by the visit to my stories//bless you

An intriguing tale which is full of tense expectancy with a great story line.. i enjoyed the story

Dhaye. a delightful poem you have penned here

I like the way your words bring out the persona of the main character.. the way you explore those deep rooted feelings, hurt and ultimately a ray of hope.. this is a great story

A great piece

this is an awesome romantic piece you have penned

Joy .. this story is actually sweet, it a great composition with peaceful lovely ghost.. it a nicely wrote piece. i enjoyed every bit to the end