Cheeky!

I like your writings. It has a very strong feeling to it. You just earned a follower!

This made me sad. I lost my father at young age.

This is so difficult to read. Lol. But good job!

Nice story. Keep readers wondering, "Whats wrong with this girl?" Thanks.

Thanks for such informative post.

Thanks for stopping by Dahmie. Am not sure when I'll be able to get the next chapter out. Am kind of multi-tasking. I write this one when I get free times. Hope this sunday I won't be that busy. Hopefully.

Nice. Things like this happened in real world.

This one so dramatic? i don't know how to explain it.

Thank you sharmy

Glad you liked it. Thank you.

So true... Great writing. Thank you.

Hope you're okay now. Be yourself and keep writing. Chase your dreams.

Thank you. I thought this is not gonna do well because most people here prefer poetry.

I like this one. Definitely what happen today.

Fantastic writing Naik. As always. I think it's time for you to take another step. Spread your wings.

Sorry Dravench if it broke your heart. I didn't mean to upset my readers...

Sorry guys. I accidentally pressed the competition button. Thanks for stopping by. =)

No am not a doctor. Still a student pursuing my degree. I took comp studies. M.D is actually a short form of my first name Mohamad.

Its a good story. Ive read both. Congrates!

Umm how do I say this . . . This story needs reworking. It's not complete my friend. Try to make it at least 300-500 words.

It's a nice and a true story to some! Because I used to experience the same thing!