Wow !!! Good story!!!

Thank you for reading it ..... I will improve .... Thank u!!

OK will be waiting for it:)))

Thank you for your comment !!! I will improve myself .... Thank you:)))

So cool..... I love your story.....part 2 ?

Wow.... Interesting story ....can't wait for the second part

I like horror movie a lot:))) how about you?

It is a good story .... I like it

Even though I was confuse at the half way but your story is good .... Cool story ,!! U can express their emotion in it!!

Never judge a book by it's cover .... True;)

It is true ....... My dad left the family ...my mom is a strong woman:))

This girl has a strong will ....... If a girl is an omen then what about her grandmother ...is she a man..... So unfair

Good love story .... Love it

I like your story .... I can imagine it.... More to comedy :))

A beautiful.written story

Your story could make a movie .... I love it

Wow!!! Do you do the next part? It is so cool and also make me wanting to know the mysterious killer

True indeed

It is a good love story

I like your story but one paragraph has so many word ... Kind of dizzy reading it;))

A beautiful story !! I like it

Your story is amazing .... I could imagine a movie in it

Everyone deserve a second chance and also a woman's right!

Your story is cool and u write it so well

Your story is interesting ..... I like your style of writing it .... :)))

There is so many future that waits for the 13 years old girl.....poor girl:(

A mom's love cannot been compare to anything!! :))