Okay I think I get it now =) Thanks for explaining. Nice work =D

This really got me choked up a little... :( I don't know if this really happened to you or you're just writing about it..but this is really heart-shattering =[

The whole poem speaks about heartbreaking truths from life =( Totally relatable. And btw, that 1D pic is hilarious lmao it was what caught my attention at first hahaaa...

I'm in love with every, single, line of this masterpiece of yours =) Keep writing!!

This story is truly interesting!! Loving it

I don't really get the gist of this but the beautiful sentences got to me =)

Glad you liked it =) Thanks for dropping by!

Great! can't wait to read more from yours. =)

This is beautiful ;) Awesome work, keep writing :))

This makes me smile :) thanks for writing this =)

This is a meaningful piece :)

Thanks for the sweet comment! =)

Thanks for following, Victor! =) Really appreciate it

I KNOW. It's sad....:( But really glad you like my story though! =) Thanks for dropping by :)

Thanks so much, vineetha! =) Really appreciate it :))

I think you totally nailed this. It got to my heart and you're good with describing emotions. Brilliant job =)

They're genius hahaa.....loving the story's moral ;)

Whoa this is interesting =D Thumbs up

This is cool :)

Glad you liked it! =)

Not trying to gush here but im so loving this one. It's like...hash tag 'thisislife' lol

God I LOVE every sentence of this work of yours. 'perfection is only for fools', 'love showed my way back'....blah blah I could quote the whole passage out. Totally relatable and it got to my heart =) You should keep writin ;)

So not fair for the girl :( but it's amazing how you can somehow transform the emotions into such masterpiece ^^b

Beautiful writing style :)

Great story ;) Yeah I agree, it's the little things in life that truly matter

Awh...I wanna give that soldier-donkey a hug!! I really love the story, keep writin! :D

Thanks, vineetha! =)