what being in love feels like
In my world of darkness you are the truth
In the sounds of silence you are my tune
In a tiresome day you are my home
In cold nights you are my comfort
For so long I haven't felt this way
Being so inlove in so many ways
And in every day that passes by
I yearn for you more and more
I wanna be true to you and give the best to you
Be the best partner this world could ever give
Be by your side when you're uncertain
Be the pillow you cry on when you're weak
Be the blanket to warm you up
And add color to your life
The feeling when you fall in love with your bestfriend, that you think everything is alright, everything is perfect, everything goes by with just YOU AND HIM. But when the moment of truth comes, everything will fall apart.
The title may seem far from the words I used, but I think this is the best way to describe it, just like the movie Upside Down. It is uncertain if I have finished the poem, but, here it goes. Hope you would like it. I would appreciate comments.
A letter of a person deeply in love containing of dreams, wishes, obsessions. Something that everybody feels when they have fallen for someone. Try to comment the hidden message ^^
This is something I have not yet finished. But somehow I want to read comments. Probably it would be continued by then. Or you could comment lines that you want to add. By the way, this is my first try to post.
If life becomes painful, we use to ask why do we live? What are we living for? Well, I guess here's the answer for my existence. How about you?
The feeling when you want someone so badly but the world is against it.
1 COMMENTS
Entim
May 16, 2018 - 14:39 What a wonderful poem! I'm under the full impression for writing my own love story on http://knowyourmeme.com/users/peggy-powers. This poem so reminds me my lover and old time when we were young people as students. It was wonderfu. Thanks for it.