Sense of Living
This is something I have not yet finished. But somehow I want to read comments. Probably it would be continued by then. Or you could comment lines that you want to add. By the way, this is my first try to post.
Sense of Living
by LeoNe.UThen I'm not alive without you
I know my heart is beating
But all that I see would be blue
You've painted my dark skies
And made my stars shine
You became the reason for my smiles
So I ask, would you please be mine
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4 COMMENTS
FieNd
November 14, 2015 - 14:02 Looks good! Short, but you said it's not finished. (don't know much about poems though!)LeoNe.U
November 14, 2015 - 14:05 Thank you for the reply. I guess it really takes time to write since it is usually based on feelings. Also, thank you for reading! ^^rekhanshiraghava
November 14, 2015 - 14:37 Please continue.... Its great.... The rhyme is superb... Keep writingLeoNe.U
November 14, 2015 - 14:43 Thank you for reading and the comment. But I am not certain when would it be finished. Your message inspired me. Thank you