The feeling when you want someone so badly but the world is against it.
The feeling when you fall in love with your bestfriend, that you think everything is alright, everything is perfect, everything goes by with just YOU AND HIM. But when the moment of truth comes, everything will fall apart.
The title may seem far from the words I used, but I think this is the best way to describe it, just like the movie Upside Down. It is uncertain if I have finished the poem, but, here it goes. Hope you would like it. I would appreciate comments.
A letter of a person deeply in love containing of dreams, wishes, obsessions. Something that everybody feels when they have fallen for someone. Try to comment the hidden message ^^
This is something I have not yet finished. But somehow I want to read comments. Probably it would be continued by then. Or you could comment lines that you want to add. By the way, this is my first try to post.
If life becomes painful, we use to ask why do we live? What are we living for? Well, I guess here's the answer for my existence. How about you?
4 COMMENTS
Susan Jacob
November 14, 2015 - 20:59 Good job Leone girl...keep going..LeoNe.U
November 14, 2015 - 23:19 Thank you ^^Velantra
January 4, 2016 - 20:30 Love is never easy. I know, I know how it feels if you know who you are meant for, but you can't be together. Believe me. Things happen at the right time. I started writing out of sadness. Would love too see you write a happy poem.pies11
October 2, 2019 - 14:22 Hello i am miss Brenda i have private discusion with you via at(piesbrenda106@gmail.com)