War Cried!

by Steven Lee
Which country was the first to initiate?

Finger pointed blame them to head.

Other nation planning to retaliate!

People fear of getting in threat!

Who's responsible for all this mess?

Money, power or even the benefits waited ahead?

All of them was the reasons to be accurate.

Benefits started to accumulate.

eye sore started to aggravate.

This is where war originate.

Blowing each others till they checkmate.

Leader of war avoiding to be assassinate.

All of this usually can be evade.

If desire of peoples was eliminate.

Come back those days that we voted for candidate.

And stop those days that we were held captivate.

We should start to communicate.

Or even learn to corporate.

Stop being such a discriminate.

And eventually start living a life that we appreciate!
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nupur27

nupur27

July 24, 2015 - 05:24 Nice attempt!!!!! I liked it!!
Steven Lee

Steven Lee

July 26, 2015 - 18:00 Thanks a lot haha
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 24, 2015 - 08:56 wow what a rhyme :)... loved it steven.. real nice.. especially the ending :D
Steven Lee

Steven Lee

July 26, 2015 - 18:00 Really ? This was my first time hehe
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 27, 2015 - 08:05 yes superrr really :P... and for the frst time, it was just impeccable :'D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 24, 2015 - 11:20 Really well written. I so agree with your every word. Love the rhymes ;D
Steven Lee

Steven Lee

July 26, 2015 - 18:01 Still gt a lot of ideas but didn't have any word to rhyme with haha
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 26, 2015 - 20:32 Aww. Still you did a great job.:D When I need rhymes I sometimes check out rhymezone. Just type a word and one can get so many rhymes :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 27, 2015 - 08:05 exactly ^
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 27, 2015 - 09:01 Peace sign ~
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 27, 2015 - 09:02 peace sign ~ :P

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