I just wrote my point of view on war P.S.First attempt....not sure what I'm doing
A lesson learnt by myself that all of us cannot judge anybody just by their appearance !
A story about a drug cartel boss named Stanley Wu which used to be a "49ers" (ordinary member/ low rank) in Triad and life after he became "Dragon Head" (leader) of the organisation. What he did to achieve his current rank was dark......
Once I get my hand on that old camera...Everything Changed! It shouldn't end like that......
She never did left her job.... She love her job but she hated her boss....
After reading this, you might treat time differently. P.S: sorry for not posting for month , kinda busy for the past couple months ... There still two story in my draft, I wrote it at different time for each paragraph, it may be weird ...
They once said if you talked about her and then she will haunt you for the rest of your life...... WARNING! READ AT YOUR OWN RISK! MIGHT HURT YOUR BRAIN! P.S. ignore grammar mistake, My brain hurt writing this .....
11 COMMENTS
nupur27
July 24, 2015 - 05:24 Nice attempt!!!!! I liked it!!Steven Lee
July 26, 2015 - 18:00 Thanks a lot hahaManahill Naik
July 24, 2015 - 08:56 wow what a rhyme :)... loved it steven.. real nice.. especially the ending :DSteven Lee
July 26, 2015 - 18:00 Really ? This was my first time heheManahill Naik
July 27, 2015 - 08:05 yes superrr really :P... and for the frst time, it was just impeccable :'DMahoobee
July 24, 2015 - 11:20 Really well written. I so agree with your every word. Love the rhymes ;DSteven Lee
July 26, 2015 - 18:01 Still gt a lot of ideas but didn't have any word to rhyme with hahaMahoobee
July 26, 2015 - 20:32 Aww. Still you did a great job.:D When I need rhymes I sometimes check out rhymezone. Just type a word and one can get so many rhymes :DManahill Naik
July 27, 2015 - 08:05 exactly ^Mahoobee
July 27, 2015 - 09:01 Peace sign ~Manahill Naik
July 27, 2015 - 09:02 peace sign ~ :P