THE MIRACLE FOR ONE DAY BUT LAST FOREVER

by Jackson Vilore
scene-1

int/day light/hospital corridor

doctor comes out of ICU room and tells the critical

situation of shilpi to her family member.

doctor-I am really sorry,she is in really critical

position,she can’t be surviving more than 2-3 hours. you all

can go and meet her,but remember one thing don’t cry in

front of her.

the whole family controls her emotions,wipes their tears.

scene-2

int/day light/outside the ICU Room

varun[elder brother of shilpi]- makes vicky understand the

situation, and tries to motivate him and make him strong.

varun-dekh beta.....etna udaas hone ki zarurt nahi hai, kuch

nahi hoga teri maa ko, sb theek hojaega....

dekh tuje hosla rakhna padega....ab tu aise royega to kaise

chalega....

vicky-[cryies more, can’t stop his tears]- ma mamma ke bina

nahi reh sakta[speaks while crying]

varun[tears in his eyes]-mela bacha.....tuje patai teri ma

hamesha tujse ek cheez chahti thi.....or vo patai kya....

vicky-kya

varun-vo hamesha se teri khushi chahti thi....tuje hamesha

khush dekhna chahti hai....chl ab aasu poch apne or under

chlke mill....

vicky-nahi.....ma under bhi rone lg jaunga[speaks while

crying]

varun-chl oye shera koi naa tera...be a brave man

yr...zindagi me sb kuch khud krna padeta hai....

or apni choti behn ka bhi dhyaan rakhna hai naa.....or tu

dekhna teri ma,tuje haste hue dekh ke kaise khushi se uthke

baith jaegi.....

vicky-hmmm....

varun-chlo,chlo under chalo sb...haste hue chalna....

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 2.

[a nurse comes into play and stops the family members]

nurse- sir under sirf koi do he jaa skte hai....

varun-acha phir aisa krte hai.....under dono bacho ko bhejte

hai pehle....anjali[younger sister of vicky] beti kaha pe

hai...[asking from chirag his younger brother]

chirag-bhaiya anjali to mandir me baithke ro rahi hai.....

varun-acha chalo ma bula ke lata hu usse.....

nurse-sir aap please jitni jldi ho sake mil lee jea....

varun-[tells chirag]- aisa ker tu anjali ko bula.....ma or

vicky tb tk jaatein hai under.....

intercutting

scene-3

int/day light/ICU room

varun and vicky enters the room and sits beside

shilpi....shilpi looks at vicky and vicky is at the verdge

of crying but varun signaled vicky not to cry by putting his

hand on vicky’s shoulder.vicky control’s his emotion...

varun-kya yr shilpi tu bhi kamaal krti hai yr....

chl uth or ghar chl.....boht natak hogaya tera...

shilpi-to smjo natak khtm hone vala hai,ab km se km talia to

bajado

varun-are aaj tere bache ka birthday hai or tu aise talia

bajane ki baat kr rahi hai...

shilpi[then immidiately she looks at vicky and realized that

she had forgotten her son’s birthday]

shilpi-vicky ...mere rajkumaar...happy birthday mele

bacha....or sorry,ess baar mamma koi gift nahi de payi naa

apne bache ko....

vicky[can’t control his emotions and starts crying]

shilpi-nahi nahi mela bacha... aise rote nahi hai....mamma

hamesha tumhaare saath hai...

vicky[hug his mother while crying]-ma nahi reh skta aapke

bina

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 3.

shilpi-mela bacha....mamma hamesha tumhaare saath hai.....ma

kaha jaa rahi hu....dekho sahi to hu ma..

muje kya hua hai

varun-or kya...avai roye jaa raha hai..ooo kakee hass

ab...abi bs thodi der me teri ma ne theek hojana hai or phir

saath me ghar chalenge...kyu shilpi sahi bol raha hu naa

ma...

shilpi-hmmm....

vicky[can’t stop his tears]

shilpi[suddenly she started feeling little uncomfortable and

asked varun with a signal to help her to sit down]

scene-4

int/day light/ICU room

suddenly doctors enter the room and watches shilpi sitting

and talking to vicky. the doctor got really shocked.the

doctors started checking shilpi in a very shocking manner.

doctors check her pulse and heartbeat.

doctor-ooohhhh my god,this is a miracle[speaks in a really

exciting and shocking way]

shilpi and varun both felt a relief

varun-dekha kakee...ma kia see naa...

doctor-i must say....god is there with you guys.....beta

just go and thank god...[smiles while speaking]

scene-5

int/afternoon/mandir

vicky runs towards the mandir which was made inside the

hospital and saw anjali sitting and crying and chirag was

trying to console her.

vicky-abe paglee....rona band kr or bhagvaan ko thank you

bolo....[anjali looks at vicky]

chirag-mtlb

vicky[with a huge smile on his face and removing his

tears]-mamma theek hogayi....

chirag-sachi...[speaks in exciting way]

(CONTINUED)

CONTINUED: 4.

vicky-sachi muchi...doctor ne khud kaha hai....

[the three of them hugged each other]

scene-6

int/afternoon/mandir

the whole family is on their knees in front of god.

scene-7

int/afternoon/gernal ward

shilpi was sitting on the bed,smiling and noticing the smile

on vicky’s face,vicky was cutting the cake and everybody are

singing happy birthday song. all are happy,vicky was

planning to go home with her mother.

anjali had made a card for her mother

anjali-mamma.....ab hum sab ghar chalenge and i promise abse

ma roj aapki her baat manungi or kabhi bhi naraaz nahi

hongi..

vicky-or ma bhi ab puri mehnt se padai karunga

shilpi was soo proude to see that her children are now

mature enough to take care of themselves.

scene-8

int/morning 6’Oclock/gernal ward

next day morning 6’o clock shilpi died.

she survived for one whole day because she knew if she had

died on that day then her son would not be able to make his

birthday throughout his life.
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