The Girl With Blood In Her Eye

by kellykelz
PAGE ONE: The Girl I Hate

It's amazing how we change, how life turns us from one thing to the other, how it gives

us a chance to redeem ourselves and sometimes creates a monster out of us. Life has done

nothing but one of these to me and am loving it. Enough with my ranting. "Hi my name is Acid,

yeah i know, why Acid? you should ask my mum she is crazy". she had me in a hospital toilet,

because she wouldn't sit at a place when the doctor asked her to. According to my mum i

smiled when i was born, the doctors tried to make me cry, but all effort arises to nothing, so

they let me be. I only cried when i was hungry or scared of something. But my mum said it

baffled her more when i cried because of another baby that was born the same day. The

babies name was Jesse.

Jesse, Jesse, Jesse, how i hate that girl, yeah hate is a strong word but for Jesse it is a

very small word. Right from birth, Jesse has haunted me, she scared me at birth, we grew up

together cause my mum taught we would be good friend since we were born on the same

day, in the same hospital and in the same room "horrible". But that never worked, i never

liked Jesse, in High school, in college, even the university. "yes, we went to school together,

all thanks to my mum". But the feeling was mutual, Jesse never liked me either, She even

hated me more than i Hated her. One time she tried to kill me, she put rat poison in my food,

claiming she saw a rat and didn't think i would still be eating the food so she used it as a trap.

who does that? she didn't even ask if i was done. Oh That was little, Jesse has done worse.

But i was glad when we graduated i couldn't wait to get away from her, i was free or so i

thought.



PAGE TWO: She’s Back

​Twenty six years of Jesse being in my life and I thought I had finally gotten rid of her,

but I was wrong. She was just getting started with me, it's been three years since we both

graduated and I was now working in my dads company as the new general manager and I

loved it because I get to drink a lot of sugar, being that I loved sugar. My dad owned Trinity

incorporated, a well known soft drink company, so you see where I get my sugar from. One

Saturday morning, I decided to visit the office, I never work on Saturdays, but I decided to this

fateful Saturday. On my way out of my house, my phone rang: "hi honey" a familiar voice said,

it took me a while to recognize it, because i hardly speak with mum on phone, she always

comes over to bug me as always. "Mum! What happened to your number and your voice?" I

asked surprised "hahaha funny, I'm using a friends phone, because mine is dead, low battery"

mum replied laughing.

"Okay" I said, "by the way guess who I ran into?" Mum questioned, "who?" I asked

exhilarated, "Jesse" mum screamed excited. "What!" I screamed aggrieved, it was as if mum

didn't get the tone of my voice because she was too excited "I'm using her mom's phone right

now, and guess what?" Mum asked, "huh" was all I could answer resentful and scared. "She Would be working with you,

starting Monday next week" mum answered gleeful, "what! No no

no no, that's it" I cut the phone. Mum called back so many times but I refused to pick, she

always has a way of mistaking my anger for happiness, I don't get it. I took my car keys, went

into my car upset and drove for the office very offended. I got to the office breathing like a

buffalo, sat down and faced my office window, "bad morning" I turned my seat to see who was

talking because I was too upset to recognize any voice that morning. "Oh hi girls" I exhaled, I

had my three best friends here with me, Sarah, Jenna and Pen. It's actually Penny but we call

her pen. "What's wrong?" Sarah asked, I took a deep breath to release my anger "the devil is

back" I answered perplexed,they already knew who i was talking about. "What!" Jenna

screamed "no way" Pen replied suit "how did you know this?" Sarah asked, "mum told me,

and that's not the worst news yet" I replied. "What is?" They all screamed eager to hear the

rest, "she would be working with us" I finally let the bomb out, I could see the look on their

faces, they couldn't believe it, "you are so dead" Jenna finally spoke after like thirty minutes,

"that's not helping" I answered her, "what do we do?" Sarah asked, "I would handle that, I

always do" I replied daringly. "I don't like the sound of that" Sarah said a little frightened. I had

enough of Jesse in school and I never want to experience that again so I had to do

something.

Five minutes after my friends had left my office, my secretary brought me a parcel,

"what is that?" I asked, "I don't know it was addressed to your office, but the name here is

different" she answered, "what name?" I asked "Blood eye" she replied "huh!" I collected the

parcel from her and that's where it all started.



PAGE THREE: The Girl I Killed

After reading what's in the parcel, i couldn't help but get worried, what does it mean

by "you are a pale soul with thirst for blood, the first and only werevamp in the history of our

kind. meet me on wales street at midnight if you want answers" i needed answers so i

headed for wales street by 12 midnight. I saw a young man, looked thirty to me and good

looking too, i walked closer to him "welcome my lady, we have been waiting" he said, "huh!,

my lady!, we!, who are you referring to" i asked surprised, suddenly a group of scary, good

looking men and ladies came flying from everywhere.

"Holy cow, what is going on? i screamed, i fell face down for cover, like that would help,

after a couple of minute i realized i was not touched, i lifted my face to see what was going

on. And to my amazement, over two thousand people were bowing down to me, i should be

scared but i wasn't, the young man walked up to me and bowed, "Time for your coronation

Lady Blood Eye" he said. "okay hold on, firstly that name isn't cool, secondly what is going on

here" i asked amazed but a little scared. Suddenly in the midst of the crowd bowed down, a

man and a woman raised up, i turned, "holy cow! mum!, dad!, okay what the hell is going on?"

i screamed and started turning pale, my teeth were shape and long, my nails were plain white

and looked like swords, my blood felt hot. "it's almost time, but before then listen carefully"mum said, i couldn't even speak at

this moment because my body was changing. "you dad is a werewolf and i am a vampire, we were never suppose to be

married but we did, this brought war between the two clans for years,until you were born, it is prophesied that on this day

there shall be a full black moon instead of the usual full red moon, and you my baby would end the

war, only if you drink the blood of a mutual without killing him or her" mum explained.

At this point, the moon was full, black and had blood inside of it, and i was already a full

blown vampirewerewolf or werevamp, whatever they called it, i felt a kind of power i had never

felt, i called on one of the strange looking people, who were now most animals and most pale,

a buffed looking guy i summoned walked up to me, i touched him with my shape sword like

nail and he melted into ashes, "oh my, am so sorry, i never meant to do that" i cried, "don't

worry honey you would get use to your strength, and a queen isn't meant to cry" dad urged.

"And one more thing don't kill the victim" mum added, "what happens if i do" i asked

concerned, "you would become immortal and live for ever" the young man answered. "And

that's a bad thing" i asked surprised, "yes, because all your loved ones would be gone" mum

cried out. "I don't want that" i cried, "then don't kill" Dad urged. "but won't the victim change" i

asked "no, its a black moon, the prophecy said they can't change during the black moon, they

would still be human" the young man replied.

Suddenly i felt very hot inside of me, i screamed, " its started, her eyes are red, the blood

queen has risen" mum screamed, "blood eye, blood eye, blood eye" everyone began to

enchant and scream, i couldn't hold myself, i felt a blood rush, i needed blood. Suddenly i

smelt blood, i lifted my face, the victims eyes were shut, her hands and mouth were tired, the

moment the set her loss, i froze. "Jesse" i screamed, now i get it, i wasn't scared of Jesse,

she was scared of me, we never got along because she was my sacrifice, this was all

destined but i still didn't like her. Jesse tried to run, i pulled her back with my power,

controlling her in the air, she came flying directly at me, i caught her and tore her neck open

and began to drink her blood, it tasted like sugar and i was enjoying every bit of it. "stop!

you're killing her" my mum screamed, i lifted up my face, my eyes were already filled with

blood, my mum froze, i smiled and went back to drinking Jesse's blood. At this moment, Jesse

was lifeless, i made sure she was dead before i let go. She fell to the ground, tears dropped

from my mom's eyes, i felt stronger different and younger. "You are immortal" mum screamed,

"i never liked her, i may as well kill her and live to do it again and again" i said undaunted. "

what have you done" mum cried, at this point dad said nothing, " i love you mum but you can't

create a beast and expect not to see a monster" i replied smiling and fulfilled. "All hail blood

eyes, all hail the queen" the young man screamed, everyone repeated and bowed.

This is just the beginning
Let others and the author know if you liked it

Liked it alot?

February 2, 2015 - 04:56 is the story over ???
kellykelz

kellykelz

February 2, 2015 - 07:20 no please this is the first episode,I,m on the second one now.
Ramisa Anjum

Ramisa Anjum

February 2, 2015 - 09:18 Is this is a vamp story?I can't understand it fully.Can you tell me in short cut.please.plesae.please!

February 2, 2015 - 09:21 You can also read my story named"HAIRS CUTTING"
kellykelz

kellykelz

February 2, 2015 - 17:55 it is about a girl whose mum is a vampire and dad a werewolf. she inherited both genes of her parents. she has powers to both species. she is a vampire who can change into a werewolf.

Similar posts

Get Out of Here

Get Out of Here

by Vanessa

"I really got to get out of here, I already know that this trip will be so boring, I should have stayed home". My little sister was always complaining about how lame it was when we went out on a family trip. But this time she was so wrong! Let...

Zarah Fatuma

Zarah Fatuma

by LUIS K.

A fictional story set in a mythical place with a touch of the mystique..

It’s My Jungle

It’s My Jungle

by davidsinghforever

Present Day - Sundarbans Tiger Reserve, West Bengal
‘What is that in the frame?’ – Shandilya asked me pointing at a small photo frame hung on the opposite wall of the drawing room.
‘Oh that!’ – I replied, handing over...

You're Next, Part One Of Two.

You're Next, Part One Of Two.
by tabathashyanne

2004, Age 5.
Lacillia was simply spending time in her room playing with her stuffed animals; her mom was out of town on a job for work and her dad was busy writing, as he was an author. Having spent no time with her dad within the...

The Watcher - Part 2

The Watcher - Part 2
by Velantra

A story about a guy to shy to talk to a girl and then he saves her from a murder.

Amys day trip to Shrewsbury

Amys day trip to Shrewsbury

by MinPerring90

The town of Shrewsbury. If Amy could describe Shrewsbury town in four words it would be stunning, greatly historic and a fantastic place for tourists to spend their afternoon.

Amy had just come back home twenty minutes ago from...