he had hopes of one day he'll make it good
..and I laugh at my self, as the tears rolled down..coz it's the world I know.. --The World I Know. by Collective Soul
this is the part two of my short story "creep" the first story is about his weird selfish love the second is about his jealousy towards her boyfriend leading into crime
I love you...please look at me! Can't you see you're driving me crazy?
10 COMMENTS
chizoba
October 6, 2015 - 17:45 Oh my goodness! Is dis true? Nice oneLea Ebio
October 7, 2015 - 05:13 thAnks for that comment chizoba.although my work is fictional but maybd somewhere out there someone is experiencing this kind of fate...or maybe that would be me in the future...P'yonce Knowmore
October 7, 2015 - 06:17 Mmmhhhh I like this poem..Lea Ebio
October 7, 2015 - 07:29 thanks pyonceSharmishtha Shenoy
October 21, 2015 - 16:09 Nice - I think all writers feel like this at one point or other....Lea Ebio
October 21, 2015 - 16:25 thanks for the compliment..I'm glad some could relate to .y poems..and thanks for the upvotes too!Ds
October 24, 2015 - 09:31 I'm sure there are many that experience this. This really moved me. I loved the final lines.Lea Ebio
October 24, 2015 - 14:47 thanks kl95! im glad you like my poem...davidehrgott
December 19, 2015 - 18:24 nice work! This poem could be enjoyed by every writer/poet.Lea Ebio
December 20, 2015 - 15:23 thanks david!