October 20, 2015
October 20, 2015
Sympathy
I am not talking about a specific person. Generally speaking, I feel like it's unfair to give people that false hope. Seriously, this was inspired by a common situation (to some couples I know) I just discovered lately.
Sympathy
by Dhaye
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We do wanted to be loved, don't we?
But it is different from sympathy
When you are down and they see your tears
When you almost give up from all of your fears
When you feel you're alone and no one's at your side
When things went wrong and there's no one to guide
When all your deeds were not right all along
When you feel different and can't find where you belong
When you feel all your goals stay undone
When your weakness pushes you to depend on someone
When you feel someone came along to care
When the person doesn't feel the same and you're not aware
We do wanted to be loved, don't we?
But please don't expect for love when the truth is it's just his sympathy...
~~~¤~~~
We do wanted to be loved, don't we?
But it is different from sympathy
When you are down and they see your tears
When you almost give up from all of your fears
When you feel you're alone and no one's at your side
When things went wrong and there's no one to guide
When all your deeds were not right all along
When you feel different and can't find where you belong
When you feel all your goals stay undone
When your weakness pushes you to depend on someone
When you feel someone came along to care
When the person doesn't feel the same and you're not aware
We do wanted to be loved, don't we?
But please don't expect for love when the truth is it's just his sympathy...
~~~¤~~~
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PLIANT (Kyrielle)
by Dhaye
A Kyrielle is a French form of rhyming poetry written in quatrains (a stanza consisting of 4 lines), and each quatrain contains a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza).
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- Rhyme
8 COMMENTS
Lea Ebio
October 20, 2015 - 04:24 yeah, absolutely right! great job dhayeDhaye
October 20, 2015 - 04:32 TY, ejayrekhanshiraghava
October 20, 2015 - 07:15 Oh my my... Heart touching... Way you wrote is just beyond putting it into words.... Great poetry.... Super like...Dhaye
October 20, 2015 - 07:47 Thanks so much, rJoy
October 24, 2015 - 07:21 Nice.... i liked it.... very touching....u can also chk out my story The Halloween Night and give your feedback.Dhaye
October 29, 2015 - 12:27 Thanks. I will.DavidBokolo
October 26, 2015 - 08:21 Being alone in a crowded room, that's what it looks like,DDhaye
October 29, 2015 - 12:28 Perhaps. Thank you, sir.