Once again, I wait for the strings to be pulled of My life. I despise, really really despise it. "Dammit! How I hate this man faffing me around like a wimp.
He treats me like a nothing. Always I've to act at his commands. He makes me kneels, break my head all the time not worrying about my bruises, even my emotions are controlled by him!
I don't like the girl he is going to marry me to. She has a flat nose and squint eyed. But, i'm helpless I've to adhere to My Masters command.
Did I mention about his whiskers, they are similar to rats,' Sigh! Wish I say that out aloud to him, but alas!
Damn! I hear the restless commotions outside. I, guess the guests for my wedding have arrived. Let me warn you they are an ill mannered, loud lots!
Excuse me, while I welcome them!
ASIDE: A loud clamour of kids shout out as the curtains unveil. "Yay! The Puppet Show is starting"
Yes Readers, I'm a Puppet. I wanted to tell my story of how i'm treated. And here I am. I too sometimes wish to become Human. But after witnessing Pinocchio's scenario i'm a bit terrified to be honest! I mean i can't imagine myself with a long nose, everytime I lie. "Brr!" it gives me creeps!
This injustice of Humans irks me all the time. I mean Man lies without inhibition all the time, but nothing grows on him from nowhere! This is utter atrocious, hmph!
Well I guess, i'm better off as a Puppet, saves me the Chaotic Human World and it's incredulity.
Now now I know You don't believe me!
5 COMMENTS
Manahill Naik
May 15, 2015 - 20:52 hmm didnt get what you actually wanted to tell... :/Mahoobee
May 16, 2015 - 12:25 It's creative though you need to describe your characters a bit more as well as the plot. :)Nightingale
May 16, 2015 - 13:39 This was actually an experimental piece. Wanted it to be a Soliloquy of a puppet with an air of suspense. But it backfired, I guess. :D Anyways, Thanks for the feedback, guys. Appreciate it.Mahoobee
May 16, 2015 - 16:49 Your very welcome :)Manahill Naik
May 16, 2015 - 19:05 oh its not really like that.. uhmm actually i think when u write something you gotta have a solid reason behind it definitely.. whch wasnt so clear here so its always better to be clear so the readers can understand the msg u wanna convey.. anyway i see the thing in you and i know you can write cos even if i didnt get the plot, the way u write was really nice.. keep up and try ur hardest best of luck :D