Run
Little child
That's what he said
Run little darling
Before I crack your head
Smile little darling
Don't have a fear
Even though you know I'm here
Breath little darling
I know you choke
But with this blood
I smear your throat
Stop little darling
I know you fret
But just wait
I'm not done yet
Blood for blood
And ash for ash
Down to the floor
Your body crash
Sputter, Sputter
Dead is thee
But now I'll keep you
For eternity
8 COMMENTS
Velantra
November 20, 2015 - 08:35 sorry Veil just busy with stuff, will read your post as possibleThe Veil of Midnight
November 20, 2015 - 20:24 No problem Velantra!Velantra
November 21, 2015 - 12:20 Scary, who is chasing her? OrVelantra
November 21, 2015 - 12:23 When you think about writing the poem. I like the way you play with words. I am really interested to know what you were thinking about when writing the poem.The Veil of Midnight
November 23, 2015 - 13:35 I was thinking at first about a parent and a child. As my imagination progressed, the parent became more end more attached to the child, so in the end he killed her. It's hard to let go and this father made sure he had to.Lea Ebio
November 23, 2015 - 04:48 Great job! I always admire how you compose your dark poem. It rhymes and scares at thesame time... Love to read moreThe Veil of Midnight
November 23, 2015 - 13:36 Thank you! I really appreciate it.pies11
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