kibosh

by Jackson Vilore
scene-1
INT.HOUSE ENTERENCE.EVENING
the doorbell rings,jackson comes from the room which is
besides to the door,jackson opens the door,there are jackson
friend danny.
JACKSON
heyyyy vinay
DANNY
heeyyyyyy
while saying this both hug each other....
JACKSON
what a pleasant surprise yr....aaj
achanak se yaha kaise aana hua.....
DANNY
bas bhai ki yaad aaee or hum chale
aaee.....n by the way she is leona
my girlfriend.
now leona comes into the picture.
JACKSON
hiii leona
LEONA
hello
JACKSON
come naa...
the both of them enters into the house.
scene-2
INT.DINNING TABLE.EVENING
the three of them are sitting on the dinning table,talking
to each other....
JACKSON
or bata kya chl raha hai....or tina
kaise hai....
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED:
2.
DANNY
oooohh rehnede theek hai naa saala
school time se peeche he pade
gaya....
LEONA
kyu aisa kya hua tha...
DANNY
aree kuch nahi tha aise he bakwaas
kr raha hai...
JACKSON
kya bakwaas kr raha hu be...jb hum
school me the naa to esko ek ladki
pasand thi tina...pura ek saal
hogaya tha or bnde ki himmat nahi
hue usse baat karne ki...or uske
baad ek din bhaisahab ko pata nahi
kya josh chada or seedha jaake tina
ko kehta
tu muje like karti hai....tu muje
like karti hai....vo bhi kehti,nahi
bhai maaf kar galti hogayi....
leona laughs.......
beta dil ke arman aasuo me beh gaye
hilte hue aaee the hilte he reh
gaye....
leona laughs.....
scene-3
DANNY
oooo etne bajaunga naa kacha bhi
nahi pehn paega....
JACKSON
oooo unglee karna buri baat hai
eslia haat kar raha hu....bata kya
khaega...
DANNY
maa dekhta hu...kya kya hai khaane
ke lia...
LEONA
jackson washroom kahape hai...
JACKSON
straight left
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 3.
INT.KITCHEN.NIGHT
leona goes to the washroom,danny and jackson goes into the
kitchen.
JACKSON
acha sun ma tere birthday pe nahi
aa paya tha naa...eslia tere lia ek
gift hai....aakhe band kr.....
jackson goes and brings the gift
JACKSON
no cheating ohk....just close your
eyes.
DANNY
acha ohk babaaa...
while saying this danny turns around...
jackson takes out the knife from the gift box and cuts the
thraot of danny.danny falls on the ground with the sound
which is being produced.....
scene-4
INT.HALL.EVENING
jackson’s mother is sitting in the hall and watching T.V.
she hears the sound of danny’s fall on the ground
scene-5
kya hua
MOTHER[VOICEOVER]
JACKSON
kuch nahi maa.....mera paar fisal
gaya tha
MOTHER[VOICEOVER]
main aau kya
JACKSON
nahi theek hu main....don’t come
here it is too slippary.....
now jackson’s comes and looks from the corner to her mother
and then he goes back towards the dead body and drags it
towards its room.while draging the dead body,the mother
is watching T.V. and does not look towards the dead
body.jackson is draging the dead body.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
scene-4
INT.BATHROOM.NIGHT
leona is washing her face.
scene-5
INT.ROOM.NIGHT
jackson takes the knife and chopes the dead body and then he
realizes that leona is in the baathroom.
scene-6
jackson is now waiting outside the bathroom with a knife in
his hand....
scene-7
leona is looking into the mirror and washing her hands...
scene-8
jackson is still waiting outside the baathroom for leona to
come out.
scene-9
the mother is sitting and watching T.V. now she starts
searching for the remote,now it is revealed that the mother
is blind.
scene-10
jackson is still standing outside the baathroom,waiting for
leona.now he knocks at the door....
scene-11
INT.WASHROOM.NIGHT
leona opens the gate and jackson enters into the bathroom
scene-12
INT.WASHROOM.NIGHT
jackson is washing knife and leona is standing besides her.
scene-13
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 5.
now we’ll show the shake hand of jackson and leona.when
leona was getting up to go to the washroom she looks at
jackson and gives the signal by moving her head.
scene-14
jackson is looking to leona into the mirror and smiling and
leona is also looking to jackson and smiling.
THE END
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