John The Detective

JOHN THE DETECTIVE 1

CHAPTER 1
John, an enquiry agent of Suspect Association , was a inquisitor who was living in Irvine which is positioned in California. He and his friend Paul were living in an unfurnished room. Paul was also an agent of that association. Paul was always telling to John about his close friend Kevin who
died. For a few days, John was perceiving the felonies of the city. He was unmindful after hearing about all the crimes. He aspired to do something for the city.


On a cloudy day, when he was strolling on the side of an unsnarl-up pavement, he caught a glimpse of a spooky, threatening house which looked as though it was erected before some 50 decades.

CHAPTER 2
He looked at the house for a few minutes. After sometime, he started going towards the house. Suddenly Paul came there and patted John's shoulder. John turned back with a shocking reaction and turned back. Paul asked John where he was going. John looked towards the house. Paul understood that he was going into the house and told John that he would join him after sometime. John continued walking towards the house. When he touched the gate of the house , the gate fell aside. John, with fear, went near the door of the house. He saw a big lock on the door which had to to unlocked by a key. John went out of the house wondering how to find the key. When he was walking on the side of the pavement , he heard people's voice which was telling that in the house, there lived a family. All the members of the family were killed by a criminal. John heard all this and went to his room.

CHAPTER 3
John was sleepless for the whole night. He was thinking for the whole night about the lock and the key. The next day, he went again to the house. He was walking around the house. There, he saw a ground which was filled with dry leaves. He was roaming here and there in the ground. Then he started searching for the key. He searched each and every edge of the ground , under the dry leaves , etc. Then he came to know that there was a well under the ground. John was moving towards the well. He found a red bucket inside the water of the well which was tied with a rope. He was searching an evidence for the crime. When he was searching, he found a rusty stain of a key on the bucket. So he made a key from the impression. Then he tried to open the big lock with that key. THE DOOR WAS UNLOCKED!!! .It was dim black. So he left the place, went to his room. The next day, he went again to the house. He opened the door and went inside. In the hall of the house, there was no light. The whole house was drowned in dark. So he turned on his torch. He found a blue colored sofa which had two bullet shots. There, he found many rooms. In the dining room, there were many scratches on the wall. In the kitchen, many vessels were lying down. He didn't disturb anything. Next, he went to the bedrooms of the house. Two bedrooms and one store room were in the ground floor. He went inside all the rooms in the ground floor and noted all the mysterious things in his notepad in which he usually noted all the evidences found.

CHAPTER 4
It was night. John took his notepad and was glancing the evidences written in the notepad. There , he found a clue that the sink in the kitchen had a drop of blood and the tap was half broken. The next morning, he went to the store room of the house. He saw a chair which had a nail half hammered on which a hair and a drop of blood was found. When he was going out of the store room, he saw a few pieces of glass. He noted these also in his notepad. After that , he decided to go to the first floor. When he was about to climb the stairs , he saw blood footprints on each step. Without stepping on the footprints, he went to the first floor. There , he found a drawing room. He saw a tag on which "Jack's Drawing room" was written. He went inside the room and saw a drawing table. On the drawing table, many photographs were pinned. In that, one photograph alone was a mysterious photograph. So he took the photo with this hands which is covered by gloves and put it in his bag. Then he saw an opened drawer of the table. He looked inside the drawer. He found a portrait which was drawn by Jack. In that portrait, he saw a hole which has been shot by a rifle. He left the drawer as it was. He also found that a rifle and a pencil were lying down on the floor. He picked the rifle and the pencil and preserved them in a cover and kept it safely. It was 4 in the evening. Next, he went to the washroom. The wash room's door had many cracks on it. He went inside the washroom. There, he saw a washbasin in which the water was flowing from the tap like a waterfalls. Above the washbasin, he saw a mirror which had been broken. Then he came out of the washroom.

He went to his room when it was 9.

CHAPTER 5

The next day, he was not able to go to the house because he and Paul went out. When they went to a shop, John enquired about the house. The shopkeeper said that all the members of the house were killed on a same day. John was thinking about this quite some time. He came to his room and took his notepad and bag and went to the house. It was 1 in the afternoon. He took his lunch in a restaurant in which he heard people's voice saying that one of the members of the house was an artist. John noted this and asked more about the members of the house. People told that builder of that house was the builder of this shop. John asked the details of the builder and contacted the builder. The builder told that he will met him the next day in a site where he was building. John went to the site , the next day. He enquired the builder about the house. The builder told that he sold the house to a family of 8 members. Then he also told that under the site, a big graveyard was present. John went to the house and went to the first floor. There he found a room which he didn't notice the previous day. He went inside the room. He saw many bullet points on the wall . He took the rifle and shot a bullet on a piece of wood. Then, he compared the bullet points on the wall and the bullet point on the wood. The bullet points were the same. Then he went to the balcony. From there he saw a swimming pool which he was unable to see when he was roaming around the house. So he came down and went near the swimming pool. Suddenly, the pool vanished. He saw only sand in that place. So he concluded that the Swimming pool can be seen only at a particular time but not always. So he thought that this might be a mysterious swimming pool. Paul was noticing John's activities and asked him what he was going to do. "What happened in that house?"

CHAPTER 6

John replied that first he had to find whether the criminal is a male or a female. Paul asked "how you will find that?" John opened his bag and showed the rifle which he took from Jack's drawing room and he concluded that one of the eight members was Jack. Paul asked how did he knew that there were eight members in the family. John told that the builder of that house whom I met, told that he sold the house to a family of eight members. Paul was also thinking about this. The next morning , Paul also went with John to the house. Paul found two cleaning brushes lying down in the store room. Paul said this to John. John came and saw and preserved it also in a cover and put it in his bag. Paul went to the balcony. He saw two mobile phones in the balcony. He took it and gave it to John. John thanked Paul for finding more evidences for him. Suddenly, a call came to Paul. So he went out and told John that he would meet him in the room. When John was thinking about the Swimming pool, he went near the Swimming pool. He saw the Swimming pool with blue water. When he jumped into the Swimming pool , he saw a ghost drowned in the water. He came out of the pool. He was confused. The pool again vanished. So he went to his room. After sometime , he began to think about the Mysterious house. Next day , he went to the house. He went into the washroom and he found that there was a brush with a bit of paste lying down. Paul asked whether he had found the mystery or not. John gave the rifle to suspect association to find who's fingerprint was in the rifle. The Suspect Association gave the result to John that the fingerprint belongs to a person living in Irvine. John told to Paul that now it is very easy to find out the mystery. John went to the house and was wondering how to catch the criminal. Then he himself created an imaginary story what would have happened. He told the imagined story to Paul.

CHAPTER 7

John told
First of all, two members would have been sitting in the sofa. Two people would have been cooking in the kitchen. In the store room , two persons would have been cleaning with the cleaning brush. In the first floor , in Jack's room, he would have drawn a portrait and kept it in his drawer. After that he would have been seeing the photographs with his pencil. Then in the wash room , a person would have been brushing his/her teeth. He/she would have opened the tap while brushing. And in the another room, two persons would have been there. Then , after some time the criminal would have entered the house. First , he would have killed the two persons who were sitting in the sofa by his rifle. By hearing the bullet sound , the persons who were cooking have put the vessels down with fear. This would have indicated the criminal that somebody is there in the kitchen also. So, he would have gone to the kitchen and would have killed them also. The bullet would have gone through them and it would have broke the tap. And the blood would have splitted on the sink. Then on stamping on the blood , the criminal would have climbed the stairs. Then he would have gone to Jack's room when he was drawing. He would have killed him also. Jack would have put his pencil down. The bullet would have gone through the portrait. The he would have gone into the room where the other two persons were there. He would have killed them also and the bullet would have gone into the wall. Then he would have locked the door and would have tried to escape. He would have threw the key in the well and would have jumped into the Swimming pool. Then the Swimming pool would have disappeared. He would have became a ghost which I saw inside the pool.
Paul was surprised by hearing this. He appreciated John for his efforts. But John told this is not the time to appreciate , this is the time we have to find the criminal who would have cleverly done all these.

CHAPTER 8

It was late at night. John told Paul that he would find the criminal and hang him. Then he slept. Suddenly , at midnight , Kevin came to John's room and fell down in John's leg and cried that the whole crime was done by me. I feel sorry for this. John was shocked to hear this. The suspense not ought to be revealed so soon..............

This story will be continued in the next part of the story.