JOHN THE DETECTIVE 2

by priyanka
JOHN THE DETECTIVE 2
CHAPTER 1

John was given a transfer to Mexico city because there also more crimes are occurring. John packed all his things in a big blue suitcase and was going to the railway station. There he asked the station master when the next train would be coming. The station master told John that there is no train coming back here. So John called Suspect Association's head Michael. He told John that he should be there in Mexico in a few days. John thought that he would go to Mexico by waterways. So he went to Gulf of California. There he saw a big tug boat sailing from California to Brazil. He thought that he would get down in Mexico. So he went inside the boat and was looking at the nature. The captain of the boat was in the control room and John did not disturb him. He went inside a room where he saw many sacks of goods. He laid down and slept for a few minutes. Suddenly, he heard a sound of thunder and came out of the room. He saw many black clouds around the boat and he was not able to see anything outside the ship. He went to the control room. There he saw the captain sleeping aside. He was thoughtless. He didn't know what do to. He was just praying God.

CHAPTER 2

The ship drowned upside down and John was in the ocean. For a few minutes, he was not able to breathe in and breathe out. Then after sometime, he became normal and was swimming here and there. He saw a golden fish and followed the fish. The Golden fish took him to a place in the ocean. The place was very silent and there were no fishes in that place. The fish showed him a large , drowned and dangerous ship which looked as thought it has drowned some centuries ago. He went inside the ship. The ship was full of dirt and it was covered with spider's traps. He saw a room which had a lot of goods and other things and went inside it. Suddenly , he saw a mirror which was somewhat different from other mirrors. When he touched the mirror , he was dragged inside the mirror. He saw a way which was full of stars and galaxies. He fainted by seeing them. After some time , he woke up. He was standing in a place which looked like the place where he was grown up. He was astonished. He saw a Hut some distance away. He thought that he would go there and find out if someone is there or not. But, he was so tired. He couldn't walk. So he hired a vehicle which was moving on the road. John asked the driver whether he could drop him in that hut. The driver accepted his request and asked him to get into the vehicle. While driving, the driver asked John from where he was coming, what's his name and more details about him. John told all the details about him and finally how he came here.

CHAPTER 3

John reached the place. He thanked the driver and went towards the hut. He went and knocked at the door. No one came and opened the door. He knocked at the door again. A struggling voice came from inside the door saying "who is this?" John replied that I am a detective and I am from California. An old woman opened the door and asked John to come inside. She gave John a glass of water and asked John about him. John told his life story and asked the woman where he was. The woman replied that this world is full of mysteries. John was shocked. Then the old woman told that she was just kidding. She told that this world is also the same as your earth. But slightly different from your world. John asked what was that difference. The old woman did not reply him and asked John if he wants something to eat. John thought that she was not willing to tell the answer for his question. John also forgot that after sometime. The old woman gave him food in a plate and John also ate the food. It was night. The old woman gave him a bed and a pillow. John thanked the woman and slept. At midnight, John suddenly woke up because of thirst. He went and drank a glass of water. As there was no way of air in the room , he came outside the house to get air. John was shocked to see the sky. He saw the whole sky with all the planets. Then he thought that it was not real and he was dreaming. But it was the true. This is the difference between earth and that earth. John went to his bed and slept. The next morning , John went to the old woman's room. But she was not in the room.

CHAPTER 4

John searched the woman inside and outside the house. Suddenly, he heard a sound from the kitchen of the hut. He went to the kitchen. There, he saw a PAN MOVING itself and the pot cooking. John was surprised!!! He went outside the house and saw that the vehicles were moving without drivers and the land got ploughed itself. John was thinking that how can a pan move itself and pot can cook itself. John was searching for the mirror where he was standing first in that world. Suddenly, the mirror came and he was dragged again into the real world. He came to the room in the ship that was drowned in the ocean. Now, he was thinking that whether he would go to that world and find the mystery or he would go to Mexico to solve the problems there. He was in dilemma. Then he thought that better he would find the mystery of that world. He went again inside the world and again went to the hut. There was no one in the hut. He came out and saw a farmer ploughing a field. He asked the farmer whether the woman has gone somewhere else. He showed the hut to the farmer. The farmer gradually replied that he can't see any hut there. John was astonished. He asked the farmer again. The farmer replied that he can't see any house or hut there. John was astonished. He asked the farmer again. The farmer replied that he can't see any house or hut there. John was astonished. He asked the farmer again. The farmer replied that he can't see any house or hut there.So John was going into the hut with confusion. John went again to the ocean and was seeing the drowned ship. He starred at the ship for a few minutes. Then he noticed a brown stick behind the mirror. He took the stick wearing a gloves. And he put the stick in a cover and safely kept the stick in his bag.

CHAPTER 5
Then again he went to that world. Now, he saw the old woman again in the hut. He asked the old woman to give some water to him. The old woman gave water in a big glass. John drank the water curiously. After sometime, he was hungry. So, he asked the old woman if she could get some food for him. John went outside the hut getting confused further every minute, and thinking how he is going to solve all these mysteries and those that were further in store for him . The old woman saw the brown stick falling aside from John's bag. She took the stick in her hand. SUDDENLY, SHE BECAME A MAGICIAN!!!!! The magician showed the stick towards a fruit and the fruit started moving upwards. It came near John's hand. John was astonished and asked the magician about these things. The magician told the story of his life. The story begins............

CHAPTER 6

I was a poor boy. I was working in a big house which was my father's friend's house, as a worker. I worked hard for hundred rupees. In the big house, and they gave me some fruits per day. My parents lost their lives in an accident. One day, a magician came to that house for some purpose. I asked the magician to give me something that would make me rich. The magician told me a spell. He told that whenever I needed something, I should tell that spell. For a few months, I forgot about the spell. Then, I wondered I needed some money
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Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

August 8, 2016 - 07:34 Nice! Waiting for the next instalment
priyanka

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August 8, 2016 - 14:57 THANKS <3

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