Halloween on A Metro!
Comes the night before halloween, and all the teens from St. Xaviers' College were excited for their 1st halloween in the college campus. They all started planning for the costumes and started their preparations. There were around 200 students going to attend halloween this time. So, they divided work in 4 parts.
Dark black, red blood, ghost white, and deadly blue. They were supposed to plan their costumes according to this code and food was planned as red apples pie, caramel candies, olive rich pizzas, cold drinks and starters and deserts.
The venue was the only thing left to be finalised. And out of no where, a teacher, who never spoke or suggested anything, asked to take up a metro train as their venue. The train was booked from night 11 to morning 5. All students got excited and started planning on halloween. Came the night finally, and as per groups discussed, all were dressed accordingly. Food was in the pantry. Train arrived and all went up their allotted compartments. Rock music started and fun began.
There were white beauties in vampire costumes, tall handsome boys in blood red jackets and there were deadly blue venoms all over with dark black shadows roaming over the train. Had their pies and appetisers. Had their cold drinks and deserts. Had their dances and games.
But one student accidentally went up to the pantry, where he wasn't allowed to step in, saw the professor killing his fellow mates, and mixing blood in apple pie, pouring cold drinks with poisonous vines, and started screaming. The professor couldn't take it anymore, he ran off to his compartment and told to his friends and told them to jump off the train, and save their lives from that monster. As they approached the door of the train, they saw the train flying over the mountains and dark forests. The metro was about 10ft above the ground and there were lightening in the sky, wind was a thunder storm at 100km/hr. All got frightened and lost their senses. The rock music turned into ghosts screaming all around, the monster professor with a knife came towards the kids.
The kids arranged a huge plastic bag and an electric wire, they hit the professor and tied him up in that bag. But poor kids forgot, that he was a ghost and can't be captivated. All screamed hard for help but all efforts were in vain. One by one all the kids were dying.
Then came the turn of winnie, she was all scared as the only one left on the train was her in the middle of her friends' cadavers. She screamed hard and hard.
Yelled for help and suddenly a hand came from the roof of the train to help her. Grabbed her from shoulder and asked her to wake up and stop screaming. Sam, her friend woke her up and told that halloween is the other night, and she should stop having fantasies for her fanatic halloween and sleep and let everyone sleep.
The next day, halloween was there and in the same metro with all around and same food and the professor even. But the difference was, all the reality came opppsite to the dream and all enjoyed the party all night long with ghosts, spirits, vampires and venoms. All in costumes and not in reality.
Happiiiieee halloween!!!
The dream that i have for halloween every night b4 halloween!!!
Though the tradition says, it is scary and ferocious !!
I believe that it is fun and only fun:P
73 COMMENTS
celestialmind
October 21, 2015 - 06:38 Thank goodness for dreams; at least one wakes up from nightmares! Its interesting to feel like you are narrating the story in person as someone listens.nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 06:41 Thankkooeeuurekhanshiraghava
October 21, 2015 - 07:06 Great writing nupur.... I loved way u narrated it... Remarkable... I was into it....nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 07:07 Thannkkiiee for commenting and upvoting:):):)sheelsdevi
October 21, 2015 - 07:13 Nupur ..my thoughts on your story were kind of lighthearted and whimsical before I knew it was all a dream..After knowing that the ferocity were all but a dream, brought a smile in to my face..well narrated and captivating toonupur27
October 21, 2015 - 07:15 Thannkkiie sheelsdevi..!!! Cant write much of sad and dark things!! So while writing thought it can be a dream and turned the ending!! Thanks for ur comments:):)Lea Ebio
October 21, 2015 - 07:27 a tale of terror with happy ending...thank god for making it all just a dream. I was nearly being carried away into the horrible fantasy world with that train..nice work!nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 07:28 Thankkiiee ejay!!! Jus trying to make the readers happie wd the halloween sweet endings!! Ty fo upvoteLea Ebio
October 21, 2015 - 07:35 nice try nupur! that was a first and you really did give us sweet endings.nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 10:03 Hahahhaa thankkiieeJoy
October 21, 2015 - 07:28 Hey nupur. .. nice story....its light hearted as well as scary.... well writtennupur27
October 21, 2015 - 07:29 Thankkiee joy for your comment and upvote!!!Joy
October 21, 2015 - 07:32 Thanks to you too for the up vote. . :)nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 10:03 Ur welcommmeAshish14
October 21, 2015 - 07:57 Fabulous :) Keep it up ..!!nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 10:01 Thankkksssiiiree 14 buddy:*Sharmishtha Shenoy
October 21, 2015 - 08:39 Good one Nupur - I like your style of writing - seems like you are addressing the audience directly. Excellent worknupur27
October 21, 2015 - 10:02 Thanks a lot sharmishtha for ur comment and upvote:):):)The Veil of Midnight
October 21, 2015 - 13:34 Wow.. like the twist!nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 13:45 Ty for the connent nd upvote:):)Velantra
October 21, 2015 - 13:39 I honestly thought the same thing is going to happen again that night, and that it was a forebode, not just a dream.......I would not have got on that train.nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 13:46 Sooo i scared u well enuf!!! Happie dreams velantara!!!nupur27
October 21, 2015 - 13:47 Nd thanks for ur comment and upvote :):)Teddy Kimathi
October 22, 2015 - 07:36 Hi Nupur. A very compelling story you've narrated. I felt as though the characters and event was real! Perfect imagery! ;-)nupur27
October 22, 2015 - 11:16 Thannkkiiuuu soo much!!!!! For ur response :):):) Give an upvote if u like it:):):):)))))Teddy Kimathi
October 22, 2015 - 13:59 I have! ^_^nupur27
October 22, 2015 - 15:18 Thankkiiee teddy;);)Teddy Kimathi
October 22, 2015 - 16:39 Welcome buddy! ;-)PJNayomi
October 22, 2015 - 14:45 Wow great!!!!nupur27
October 22, 2015 - 15:18 Thankkss fo upvote and commentsManahill Naik
October 22, 2015 - 19:59 hahah such a quick, short and warmmm story... loveeddd ittt goood jobbb <3 <3nupur27
October 23, 2015 - 06:59 Tytytytyyyy manahil:):):) long time!!!! And thannkkii fo comments n upvote!!!!Manahill Naik
October 23, 2015 - 12:02 ur welcome :D yea longggg time :Dnupur27
October 23, 2015 - 12:07 Why am I nt seeing ur entry??? Lookin forward for tat!! Don't tell nt participating!!!Manahill Naik
October 23, 2015 - 12:18 hehe i still havent made up my mind :/ :PRach
October 23, 2015 - 12:50 Mah schoolz name is St. Xaviers !!! Jus hope this never comes to reality!!! Any of this ;)nupur27
October 24, 2015 - 20:04 Ohhh than it's scary!!! Fo u!!crystal123
October 24, 2015 - 18:19 captivating story !!! love it nice endingnupur27
October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thanks crystal for upvote and coments!!!Hetz
October 24, 2015 - 18:52 Liked the twist and end!!!! Good work!!!nupur27
October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thanks for encouraging !!!Jinnu
October 24, 2015 - 19:26 was scared totally!!! Nice work babe!! Krep it up!!nupur27
October 24, 2015 - 20:05 Thannkkiiee jinnu!!!!Dhwani
October 24, 2015 - 19:33 Loved ittt sweettiie:):):):):):)nupur27
October 24, 2015 - 20:06 Awww thanks lil sis;)Vishnumayaa
October 25, 2015 - 07:27 AW..so nice .. ALL THE BESTnupur27
October 25, 2015 - 14:04 Thankkiiee thannkkkiiee:):)Vishnumayaa
October 25, 2015 - 15:12 Welcomeie......crystal123
October 25, 2015 - 14:35 i actually like the idea of flying bus its really nice:)nupur27
October 25, 2015 - 17:02 Thankkiiee for comments and upvote!!! :):)Zyeke Daniels
October 25, 2015 - 14:40 Interesting style and nice lighthearted story. Wish you the best for future stories.nupur27
October 25, 2015 - 17:02 Thankiiiuu so much fo ur wishes!!! :):) and comments and upvote:):)Nidhhzz
October 26, 2015 - 04:36 Loved it nupurrddiii :):) worth signing up!!!!nupur27
October 27, 2015 - 04:36 Hehehhee i told u!!Kukkiiee
October 26, 2015 - 07:30 Bivdaiivii te to baaki!! Had to comment in our language u see!!!:):):)nupur27
October 27, 2015 - 04:37 Hahahha so gujju!!!!Nandu
October 26, 2015 - 07:41 Sweet light and scary it was!!!! Loved it mah gal!!!:):)Mahabali
October 26, 2015 - 07:47 Rockinggggg paaaadddiiiiiiii:):):) Loved it and ur writting since college days u know:)Yesha
October 26, 2015 - 07:58 Scary it was !! All the best!!! I hope wd all of me tat u are thee result:)Moonland
October 26, 2015 - 08:01 Moon is mah destiny!!! This one is urs!!! And i know it!! U ll reach out ur moon;):)Kotak:)
October 26, 2015 - 08:05 Kairu kaam ho bhuriii;) Our style u see:):)Nayan
October 26, 2015 - 16:59 Very good;);) Nice effortsJasani
October 26, 2015 - 17:02 Light and scary it was!!! :):)Disha Mehta
October 26, 2015 - 19:46 Good one Nupur... :) Keep writing this cool stuff...nupur27
October 27, 2015 - 04:38 ThannkkiieeeHenny Shah
October 26, 2015 - 19:54 Nupur good job done here... you are turning out to be a marvelous writer...nupur27
October 27, 2015 - 04:38 Thankkiieuu soo much!!!:):)Rushli
October 28, 2015 - 10:35 Good work sis!!!.)pinak
October 29, 2015 - 19:53 scary though interesting...Susan Jacob
October 29, 2015 - 20:32 Nuuupurrrr,,,,,,,that is wonderful story....just remarkable narration :) Between, I too use to have the same kind of weird dreams.....I could coorelate so easily :D Simply loved itnupur27
October 31, 2015 - 14:20 Thannkkkiiieeeee whispering waters:):):):):):)Manzee
October 30, 2015 - 12:21 Noona!!!! Loved it!!!:):) Great going gal!!!:):):)pies11
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