Cold Mirror Lies

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Cold Mirror Lies

She is fine, but she still cries

And it is a surprise that she hasn't change

She had been testing herself too much

Maybe she should stop breathing now

The best surface is the thing she always retain

And a personality always guided by her name.

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derp

September 25, 2015 - 01:44 "And it is a surprise that she hasn't change" Is that supposed to be changed, as in past tense?

samewriter

September 25, 2015 - 05:24 When writing poetry, you have quite a bit more freedom than when you’re writing prose. You can go ahead and break rules of grammar—but do so for a reason. Some writers will break all sorts of rules of grammar and spelling, either because they are poor grammarians or bad spellers or because they want to be different only for the sake of being different. My take on breaking rules is that one should do so purposely and with some forethought. (c) http://tommach.tumblr.com/post/6842235614/poetry-and-grammar-should-there-be-any-rules I am a poetry writer, I am not that good at grammar but doing such grammatical error has a reason, only if you get why that “error” is it made. Thank you for reading.