I let go! Now it's finally over
I can't believe it finally comes to an end
I suffered a lot...
cried a lot...
and now I cannot shed a tear anymore
You fooled me over and over
til my trust is broken
And now my faith is all in shambles
hear my heart..it crumbles...
I'm broken all in pieces
Deceive by your sweet nothings and kisses
But where are you now? I wonder
My jealous heart begins to ponder
It's beenso long since the last timeI saw you
And this emptiness makes me wanna let go...
Time is my company
and yet still my enemy...
My mind cease to think
maybe someday my heart will also stop to beat
maybe I will be frozen here with time
when he will someday come back to me...
Yet I don't know if I could feel that way again
feel the warmth of love and joy
because here I am hurting...
and already broken.
8 COMMENTS
DavidBokolo
September 3, 2015 - 16:09 Sometimes it pays to let go, but there must a reason why, from the other end. nice piece E.Lea Ebio
September 3, 2015 - 16:14 Big thanks! It is an honor to hear a comment from you.stomachfull
September 3, 2015 - 19:26 there are very nice dynamics in this poem! I can't find the right word, but there is something about it - truth? sincerity? - that makes it very interesting to read. Maybe a very truthful honesty with yourself about how you feel? It seems as if the poem bears wittnes to some humbling acceptance that is starting to emerge - would you say it is in any way involved in how you feel? thanks!Lea Ebio
September 4, 2015 - 01:46 thanks stomachfull...clever of you to say that..true...a little of it reflects my emotionFlynnMarhu
September 28, 2015 - 10:48 This poem is simple yet amazing.Thanks for sharing !! :)Lea Ebio
September 28, 2015 - 11:06 thanks flynnJefrizza
October 1, 2015 - 06:04 It makes me feel like 'letting go' is actually a great choice.Lea Ebio
October 1, 2015 - 06:58 yeah sometimes it is..thanks jefrizza