July 23, 2016

An ocean in a drop!

This is a short poem on tears which are actually deeper than they seem! Hope the eloquence and deep meanings and poetic devices utilized,impress you...

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An ocean in a drop!

by Sivaranjini Senthilvel

Orbs of tears queue behind the closed eyelids,
And slide down gently from the eyelash..

Like raindrops,that cascade and fall,
From the greenish needles of fine fescues...

It isn't just a drop!
It's an ocean of incessant disappointments and despondence...
That storms violently,when the heart bleeds!

It's a salty sea of pain,shrunken to a drop,
To hide the magnitude of melancholy in the heart!

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Liked it alot?

Mahoobee

July 23, 2016 - 22:00 Good job. Got a deep meaning to it :)

Sivaranjini Senthilvel

July 24, 2016 - 01:31 Thanks a lot

Sharmishtha Shenoy

July 24, 2016 - 07:21 What is fine fescues?

Sivaranjini Senthilvel

July 24, 2016 - 07:30 It is a type of green grass with needle like slender leaves. When it rains, the rain drops gently cascade on the leaf and hang in the tip of the leaf and finally drop down. This I have compared to tears dropping from eyelashes Thanks for caring to ask

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