Poignant Tale of two children by Sheela Devi was so touchingly spooky..well written.

Amazing presentation of fear..gave me goosebumps. .well done.

Each word..every line leaves you spell-bound..a tale of intrigue..venom and also love.....there's nothing in this world ,that Love cannot conquer..Congratulations Sheela..for such a unique theme..well written.

Very touching indeed..

Great work..nail-biting finish.Hats off Sheela

A simple theme written with feeling .Short and sweet ,and intrigues your mind with a tinge of anxiety,as to what will happen in the end. I liked it very much.