This looks great! My only comment is you could have chosen "smaller" words to make it easier to read but I guess that is just me. Again, wonderful piece!

Hi! Just a simple advice. Try to read through this again and you can see some very minor errors you might want to correct. Oh... And you really love your commas and exclamation marks, huh? But this is a great story. Just needs a bit of polishing.

Hmm... How should I put this. I wanted more. Not in a bad way. But this was really a good piece. Considering you were limited. I liked how you gave us a good picture of Rupert without compromising the whole story. I can almost imagine him hitting the keys of the old typewriter every single day. Great piece!