What a LOVE STORY?!!!?!?!?!

by Rov Alba
Debbie and Rachel are such a best of friends. They have many things in common, usually the girlish stuffs. But this beautiful friendship comes to the test when a certain guy name Ariel came into their life. Ariel is not good looking; he is not even smart either. But our girls seem crazy about this guy. Ariel is also interested in both girls, but one of them he finds really fascinating, and he wants to court this girl he like, and that girl is Debbie. So Ariel befriends Rachel so that maybe Rachel can help him to court Debbie. He asks Rachel all Debbie’s interests, her likes to certain type of guy, etc… Ariel and Rachel became so close, they seem getting along well, to the dismay of Debbie. She asks Rachel if Ariel is courting her. Rachel, true friend as she was to both people, tell Debbie that she is only assisting Ariel on his subjects that he finds difficult, and Ariel believe only she can help him. Debbie was not yet convince of Rachel’s answers. But anyway, if Ariel really loves Rachel, maybe it’s no longer her business. She knows that Rachel is her best friend, or maybe Rachel is not yet ready to tell her that both of them are madly in love. Debbie somehow seems sad because sooner or later, if Rachel and Ariel become steady, she will lose her best friend. She will instead focus her attention to Ariel. Not knowing to Debbie, Rachel urges Ariel to court her Debbie as soon as possible. But Ariel seems not yet ready. Suddenly, Rachel comes up with the plan to help Ariel. She tells Debbie that what if they should have an out of town vacation, and that includes Ariel. Debbie was surprise and upset, because before, it was only the two of them who usually have this getting together stuff, but right now, that includes Ariel. Anyway she tags along. During their vacation, Debbie, was only jealous and envious while Rachel and Ariel are having fun together. She can’t believe Rachel is doing this to her. Debbie wants from Rachel is why can’t she just tell her the truth she and Ariel have mutual understanding. Suddenly, Ariel now has guts to court Debbie. Debbie is for the meantime doing something when Ariel comes near her. Debbie is only in state of awe now that the guy is with her. She ask him how is he and Rachel are getting along. This time, Ariel tells Debbie the truth. He is not in love with Rachel, but with her. He only uses Rachel so that he can be near her. Debbie, of course, was shock to his revelation. But Ariel has to know more about Debbie. Debbie is also in love, not with Ariel. DEBBIE IS IN LOVE WITH HER BEST FRIEND, RACHEL. And that’s the end of our story.
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Wogiam T. P

Wogiam T. P

March 19, 2015 - 16:50 This is a love triangle, a pity someone would lose out in the end.
celestialmind

celestialmind

April 20, 2015 - 11:04 A love triangle. Interesting.

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