My love, do you still remember me?
Our vow- we made it under this mango tree
I was younger then while you were old enough
But in my heart I knew you're my better half
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Your face that night, it's painted here inside
After the wedding, we had that romantic ride
We took that road riding on a pretty white horse
You were holding me throughout the journey, of course
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But suddenly a storm came while we're on our way
You've loosen your grip, we didn't make our day
A strong wind got me while you were thrown afar
We've been apart, heart-broken like victims of war
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My love, do you still remember me?
Two years and more, we're here under this mango tree
Now, I'm tracing the curved hearts with our names entwined
Wishing that like them, you and I have that strongest bind
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My love, do you still remember me?
Until now, your memories never set me free...
4 COMMENTS
Velantra
November 6, 2015 - 15:03 beautiful and sad..... I like the way you wrote it. I don't know much about writing poems, but I am learning a lot here. This is a new and fresh learning experience for me, Thank you Dhaye and thanks for the up votes on my stories. I am definitely going to try writing a poem in this style xxDhaye
November 26, 2015 - 12:29 Thanks for the kind words, V.Lea Ebio
November 24, 2015 - 07:36 sad but beautiful ....great piece and poignant.. i love the way you writeDhaye
November 26, 2015 - 12:29 Thanks, ejay