jealousy

by katherine phang
Jealousy really makes a person goes ugly . what is jealousy , it is what the people want of what the other person has and wanting to have it . this story told about what a jealously can be so ugly . Sarah and Jane , were best friend . they want to enter the entertainment world . Sarah and Jane can sing but Jane is said to have a voice of an angel. Jane won first all the time and Sarah got second . Sarah even thought she is smiling at Jane but she felt the anger and jealousy in her heart. Jane has the beauty , rich family and the voice . sarah has a normal family and if compare to jane she is nothing.

When both of them enter the competition on the tv . they both pass but jane has the judges attention . sarah felt anger when she got second again but for the next round she will win she swear to herself . she called her boyfriend and his gang to frighten jane for a bit but something when wrong. They act as they want rob from jane , every of them took a knife . jane is so afraid , she throw her bag at them and try to run but the gang act to real . she punch the guy when he try to push her , the guy when angry and stab her on the stomach and slit through her neck . his friend pull him shouted are you crazy. Jane look at them eye wide open . they run so fast , then a couple who walk past the park saw it and call the police.

Jane is not dead but she can't sing anymore . she just stare at the window sadly . Sarah won the first , she even took the prize to Jane wanting Jane to be jealous but Jane just smile and write a word ' u have done well! ' . Sarah felt anger why , why isn't Jane felt jealous . then few days later Jane is dead , they told Sarah she suicide .

Sarah do hate Jane but she felt lonely and empty in her heart . she throw away the feeling and join a singing company. She win many prizes and become a top singer . One day , her boyfriend find her and told her before Jane suicide ,he goes to see Jane. He told sorry to Jane about the incident saying it is the plan of his girlfriend Sarah , Jane look at him eyes full of tears , she cried while try to shout but no voice come out . then jack ran out the room sawing Jane cried. Sarah slap him saying why he told her.

~ I am enough with your jealousy , I felt sorry for Jane , don't u told me before Jane was the one who teach u how to sing and even bring u anywhere to play .

~ enough....... , I just told u to frighten her not cut her . GO OUT !!!! .....

Jack went out then Sarah just sit there staring at the mirror at the make up desk while brushing her hair then suddenly she felt cold . she turn and adjust the air conditioner after adjusting it she look at the mirror Jane is brushing her hair . Sarah stun and brave herself she pull Jane to look if it is real , Jane eyes bleed , her neck is full of blood and Jane strangle Sarah . Sarah shout and woke up in her bed .

~is it a dream? .....

She felt pain at her neck and look at the mirror . bruise on her neck with fingerprints. The phone rang she jump for a while and answer the phone.

~ Sam is dead !!!!!

~ who is Sam ? Jack.

~ the one who accidently hurt Jane .....he is dead . his roommate saw his body this morning , a slit on his neck and his stomach is stab many times. His room is lock and no equipment is found .

~ so ....?

~ what do you mean SO? He is killed by Jane .... Don't you understand .......

~ I am busy and have no time for your nonsense

Sarah hang up the phone and look at herself at the mirror saying there is nothing such as ghost . she dress up and went out . she felt someone is watching her near the door , she ran near the door and saw a girl . she took a notebook at her hand and said she is the fan of Sarah and wanted her autograph and photo. Sarah just smiled and gave it to her . when the girl walk away , the girl see the picture again .`weird ? What is this orb thing near Sarah ' she whisper herself thought it was just the uz ray.

Sarah drive on the way to the studio , she open the radio to listen some songs but instead of song she heard some voice , a whisper at her radio. No song but a woman moaning and whispering . she closed the radio but it can't . suddenly she felt , an uneasy feeling like something or someone is near her. When she turn back to see , Jane's face is just in front of her . look straight into Sarah eyes , her bloody eye shoots came out . she moan for Sarah to give back her voice. Sarah shout and her car bang on a tree but she is not injured just some small scratches.

`No one , is gonna stop me from being on stage tonight .....NO ONE!!!!' As Sarah arrive the studio bought by her manager. Her manager help her to clean the bruises and change the cloth . Sarah went up the stage to see the stage got many of her fan . ` this is suppose to be my life my concert , not Jane's!!!' She think.

When she sing , she even attract the audience to sing together . Not long , she heard a voice that is so harsh and unbearable to listen . she shouted `STOP!!!!!! It is so noisy . ' every audience look at her , her manager rush up and said to her ` are you crazy???? Every audience is looking at you . even if they sang badly . just ignore them ' she shook her head ` no!!, this voice is so unbearable to listen it sting my ears '

Suddenly she felt as if the temperature has sudden drop . then she heard the voice again , it is ugly voice even louder . then she open her eye saw Jane was singing it . Jane's voice is sharply stab in her ears , Sarah shouted stop many time. Her manager try to cool her down but she push her manager down the stage . The stage suddenly become a dark room . Jane is holding her hand , Sarah try to pull her hand away but unsuccessful . Jane bleed more and more , her face is even near their eyes met . jane's look at Sarah and smile but not the kind smile that she use to smile but a smirking smile that let Sarah felt every of her skin got goosebumps.

She push jane away then she heard someone shout look out . when she look around she is back at her stage but when she look up the stage light drop down and crashed on her . every audience scream as blood is spilling all over the stage. Sarah felt all her bone is broken , full of blood in front of her then she saw Jane look at her and turn away. Slowly she felt the metal is crushing her .

Suddenly she woke up then she look at the stadium . it is empty . then she saw her manager sitting there , she run to her manager but she went through her . she shout for her manager but her manager can't hear her then she saw the news on the floor .

22MAY2015 ~ the new singer Sarah long has died being crashed by the light stage due to the metal is starting to get lose.

` No!!!! ' she scream then she look by the mirror she is transparent but her body is full of blood , her eyes is about to pop out full of blood , her teeth is all broken . then a hand came to her neck , look through the mirror it is Jane .

~ well..... Your nightmare just begun....

Sarah shouted as she being pull down ..... ` NO, NO NO!!!!!!!' . her nightmare begins again and again at the stage being crushed and crushed again by the stage light . some workers heard her screaming so the stage is called haunted and no one is there . but Sarah's soul repeating of being crush again and again and again .

If Sarah haven have the jealousy , the both of them may have been the best duet team . but her jealousy contains harm , the harm contains hatred and hatred contains revenge . An eye for an eye , that is what told by the old folks .
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Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 24, 2015 - 08:54 The plot and the story is really good though work a bit on your grammar. I am pretty sure you'll rock. :D
katherine phang

katherine phang

May 24, 2015 - 17:16 Thank you for your comment !!! I will improve myself .... Thank you:)))
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 24, 2015 - 18:04 Your very welcome :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

May 25, 2015 - 20:43 hmm i agree with maham.. the grammar is what needs to be worked on and other than that its awesome.. the theme and stuff :)
katherine phang

katherine phang

May 27, 2015 - 08:26 Thank you for reading it ..... I will improve .... Thank u!!
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brenda00

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