Invisible

by MahrukhAtif11
Chapter no # 1 :

"GET UP ,NOW". No not again . This cant happen ,I cant handle it anymore !

So I purposly keep my eyes shut but i know that would bring me no good except for a few seconds . I waited for it to come and then as expected ZAPPP ! He zaped me with that electronic rod and an ear piercing scream left my mouth "AGHHHHHH!"

That was not the end of it ,it never is ,why cant i just learn my lesson ? But then im not sarah simon without being stubborn .

Like always tears trickle down my cheek and on the cold metal floor , yes the floor is metal . Then comes part two , the s- i was cut in the middle of my thought as my cheek started to sting indicating that it has been slapped ,hard. Now hes gonna kic-

Before i even got time to react to the slap , a flying kick came in contact with my stomach and i know exactly from Where. It hurts , it fucking hurts .

Next he will wait exactly one min . And in that one min - since i am uterly defenceless - all i do is cry .I try to take in the pain . These sixty seconds help a lot . I didnt know I would be so glad in my life to breath sixty seconds without being hit . HA that sounds a wierd thing to say but believe me , if you were in my place you would have understood me .

I wish .

" time is up " he smiled . And then everything was black .

**** next chapter will come soon :) ****
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

March 28, 2015 - 11:39 great work mahrukh.. really nice :)
MahrukhAtif11

MahrukhAtif11

March 28, 2015 - 12:18 Thankyou .. so much it means alot :)
MahrukhAtif11

MahrukhAtif11

March 28, 2015 - 12:21 Sorry for being annoying but ... would u mind getting me some reads or something , you know ike tellimg someone to read it .... soo yeah sorry for my annoyingness :/ :)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

March 28, 2015 - 12:34 aww its alrite.. ill try my best.. i have some friends here you know
MahrukhAtif11

MahrukhAtif11

March 28, 2015 - 12:57 Thanks :)
Amaan Siddiqui

Amaan Siddiqui

May 3, 2015 - 16:49 well written
MahrukhAtif11

MahrukhAtif11

May 11, 2015 - 09:34 thankyou . first time writing online ... so its got to be a little bad . sorry if it was not that good :)

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