I am the great
the master of dreams
please hear me out
because I'll exagerate to the extremes...
I am the great writer
the one who weaves
great great stories
no one believes.
I am the richest of all
the one who owns a billion
oh but no one to fool
because I've got a million debts to them all.
I am the great story-teller
the spinner of lies
oh behold the make-believe world
from the depths of my eyes.
I am the great warrior
the enemy at every door
when I turn up unexpectedly
trouble will come for sure.
I am the great sinner
oh why don't you believe?
Is it because I carry a bible
and the sacred mass I recieve?
I am the great good
oh the biggest crazy lies
I promise the better living I will uphold
When in fact, I am just after your gold.
I am the great
the advocate of lies
when I talk to someone
they get deceived by my eyes
so beware
if you dare
chance to encounter
the great
pretender...
I apologize for this crazy poem. Forgive my sanity folks. Happy reading btw!
10 COMMENTS
Velantra
December 6, 2015 - 11:29 HeyVelantra
December 6, 2015 - 11:32 Thanks for up vote. Will read ur posts asap xxxLea Ebio
December 7, 2015 - 13:49 thanks for the upvote too and for liking my postsVelantra
December 6, 2015 - 14:34 It is not crazy the poem, I enjoyed it. Can I ask you something: The characters in my story: Fire of Caveat.... my husband is upset. He says they swear to much " **** ". Do you think so as well, or think it is fine. Or must I delete it. I would appreciate your input...Lea Ebio
December 7, 2015 - 13:48 um...honestly speaking..yes...way too many swearing my friend....it kinds of hurt the eyes or ear if it is actually said...but the plot is getting exciting...but I think u should reduce the swearingVelantra
December 7, 2015 - 17:23 Thank you for your honestly my friend. will take care of that immediately. (there is a reason tho, hope you read between the lines as writer.) and your reply on samewriters poem: write and feel and let us pick up the pieces here together in our stories xxLea Ebio
December 9, 2015 - 15:15 of course, I knoe you're trying to portray their intense emotions though...but I still can grasp the essense of the story despite the swearingsdotdotdot
December 10, 2015 - 07:19 wouldn't call this crazy. it's greatLea Ebio
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