Beauty is not within...

by Joy
As a girl,
I was made to believe
That beauty is not within,
It's not fat, but being thin.

As a young woman,
I was made to believe
That beauty is not within,
But it's your fair skin.

It's only in theory
That beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder,
But the truth is otherwise,
Whether you are young or older.

In this superficial world,
We are all made to believe
That it's beauty and not character
In life: we should achieve.

To the eye,
One's looks may appeal
But in the end,
It's all about the feel.

Let us understand one thing,
That a book cannot be judged by its cover
And no matter what you think about your looks,
You will always be beautiful
in the eyes of your lover.

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Guys this is the first time I have written a poem. I have never even attempted to try before. So I need your encouragement through ur comments. Negative but polite comments are also welcome :)
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Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 30, 2015 - 06:04 Good one but I always thought you are a man!
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 06:20 Haha. .. no i'm a woman and my real name is Joyline :)
Sharmishtha Shenoy

Sharmishtha Shenoy

October 30, 2015 - 06:21
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 13:18 Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)
Lea Ebio

Lea Ebio

October 30, 2015 - 07:15 nice poem..keep on writing
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 13:18 Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

October 30, 2015 - 07:28 Wow... Writing.... Loved it...
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 13:19 Thanks for ur comments and up vote :)
reena maria dsa

reena maria dsa

October 30, 2015 - 18:00 its not easy writing poems so I feel you done an amazing job... and being a girl Its sad that guys don't see inner beauty their more fascinated by the cover...but I loved your poem its sure to bring a smile on every girls face :) keep it up looking forward to read more .
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 18:04 Thank you so much for your lovely comment and the up vote. .. This is my first poem... i usually write short stories... u can chk out my latest story the halloween night and give ur feedback :)
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

October 30, 2015 - 19:35 whoaaa beauty in your words joy?? i remember my frst attempt was rather silly. ur damn good and i can sense tht u can write poems too :P keep up amd want mo :P
Joy

Joy

October 30, 2015 - 20:33 Thank you so much manahil. .. ur comment really motivates me to write more and thanks for the up vote too :)
Velantra

Velantra

October 31, 2015 - 16:33 This is great girl!!!!!!! and true, so true!!!!!!!! i am also scared to write poems. You did a great job! Be proud....x
Joy

Joy

October 31, 2015 - 18:02 Thank you so much velantra for your lovely comment. ... It means a lot :)
KayleeMumba

KayleeMumba

November 3, 2015 - 09:26 i loved it joy. so grt
Joy

Joy

November 3, 2015 - 11:39 Thanks kaylee mumba :)
KayleeMumba

KayleeMumba

November 16, 2015 - 19:54 ur welcome

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