Good Work Mack!! I loved the way you took it till the last word rhyming impeccably
Thankyou MackDonnut !!! Sorry for being late.... i was out of typotic for a while :)
Thankyou girl !!! I was out of typotic for a while..... just came to see your new work today,,, just wonderful :)
Thankyouuuu.....by the way, sorry for the late reply,,, i was out for a while :)
Ha Ha.....I love to read scary things :D
U are most welcome
Thankyou chechiiee.....Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and for upvoting....I am so much obliged :)
Oweeee.....Thankyou soooo much dear friend.....you made my day :) Yey....wish you a happy scary Halloweeennnn :D
Thankyou Sharmishtha....Thanks a lot for the lovely comment and the upvote :)
Thankyou so much friend :) Yeah, my mumma too told the same that I have left a loophole for a climax-guess......great you guessed it right :D I will try to make it better in my next one :)
I liked your style of writing...Good Work :)
Scary....creepy....Godd!!! You scared me out.....that is nice piece of work :)
Quite a wonderful piece of writing !!!! I liked the title.....No words... a beautiful one Keep going
Creepy and Scary....You just heated up the story till the end...Loved your style of writing
Good Work ...Keep going :)
A beautifully written combination of emotions....fear, love, care, scary....ahhh every thing....just a perfect writing Sheela Chechy :) Loved it
Creepy....scaryyyyyyyy.....beautifully written.....Good Work :)
Nice plot and a wonderful narration :) I too use to have nightmares :D Thank God, after all it is safe ended ;)
Scary and Creepy.......i just liked it. This is a well narrated piece :)
Supernatural !!! Nicely written....i liked the plot though i got confused somewhere
Nuuupurrrr,,,,,,,that is wonderful story....just remarkable narration :) Between, I too use to have the same kind of weird dreams.....I could coorelate so easily :D Simply loved it
Indeed a creepy Halloween Story!!! Good Work
Hey crystal clear, that is a good piece of work :) Loved the title and the end... Just keep going :)
The plot was good but yet a bit confusing.....Keep going :)
That is a nicely written story Vishnu :) Well done girl.....Just keep going :)
That was a wonderful read dear :)
You are welcome :)
Good Work Mack!! I loved the way you took it till the last word rhyming impeccably