This is very special. As a young man I stayed on Robben Island for a couple of years and had the privilege of diving almost every day that the see allowed me to amongst the kelp. Never has anyone opened up the resemblance of freedom to me in such a way. Respectfully, the kelp was a safe haven against the majority species of sharks in that area.
I like a good poem. This one blended emotions into the Zen mind.
Let's see how the jailbird is going to cope in the outside world.
The caracters are real and reminds me of the stories being told so often in the office. Wel done.
I like your poets. It opens like a flower, filled with expression and passion.
The little one's, so unique, they live for the moment, but protect you with everything they need for their future.
This is WOW!!
Now that is commitment. I love this poem.
Such an unforeseeable outcome. I wish she got to him 1st.
Sounds like God wrote with His finger in the sand of your garden, every day. May the sun shine upon your soul.
This reminds me of a tv program I have seen. Our actions and considerate choice of words can make or break a person. Though it takes the same amount of effort to say something, the impact has a 1000 fold larger impact on that person.
This is going to be hell. Too many parasites feeding from one's credit card. Keep on writing; I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Great. I would like to see where this story is going to take us. Keep on writing. I love your stories, because it is about real life.
This is a great poem. They look so happy together. Her presence was the comfort of their future.
I like this. Reminds me of my younger days when I had no-one to lean on.
Yip, a woman can pull a large ship off it's course and strand it on a shallow reef :-)
I love this. It is unexpectedly fresh and very funny.