Thanks. Is it really good?
This is pure gold! Or maybe a diamond. Anyway, I was touched.
This is me right now. The memories are so good that they hurt.
I don't know if I figured it all out, but your story's quite interesting. That's the main point of storytelling - be interesting. And you just did that man.
I love this kind of story: Stephen King-ish. Although the mother has no backstory to support her actions, I enjoyed the story more than I expected. You inspired me to write something in line with your horror tale.
Well, thanks for some insights, David.
I really hate how I write. It's always not clear. But anyway, I hope you liked it.
Sorry. I just wrote this for thirty minutes. I'll try to make the next part longer.