Tell Him...

by Mahoobee
If you see him strolling in the park,

tell him that I'm waiting.

Tell him,

My walls are covered with his name.

And I have painted the whole galaxy on my ceiling.

The falling stars are crashing on the floor beside me.

Tell him,

they are bringing our shared memories,

And they are shattering on the floor.

Everything looks so like a dream.

Tell him,

I'm sitting on the chair,

with buckets around me,

so they can catch all the beauty.

Tell him,

I'm smiling and I'm broken.

I am whispering words which were never spoken.

And shedding tears made up of glass.

Tell him,

I was screaming lies.

And I'm sorry.

Back then,

I filled his hollow mind,

with flowers and trees for shade.

How was I suppose to know?

His heart would slowly fade,

Eaten alive by his soul.

He fled to the place where we first met.

A deserted park with a single sakura tree.

He is a walking corpse,

Drowned in a deep grey sea.

If you find him.

Tell him,

I will save him.

The light may go dim,

due to the darkness around.

But I'll never wither.

Tell him,

Come home to me.

And his body is free,

from all the chains he self created.

Tell him,

I'm waiting,

he'd better hurry.

Cause The azures light is turning into grey,

I don't want to turn into a shadow,

without seeing him,

And begging him to stay.

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Mahoobee (25-05-15)

Sakure tree: Also known as "cherry blossom" is a flower tree :D One of my fav.
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

May 25, 2015 - 19:57 lol hahah at the ending :P AND A BIG AWED LOOK at your beeautiful beautiful poem.. this was one of your bests i promise :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 25, 2015 - 19:59 The ending? o.o what about it? Thank youuuuuu so much, Manahilllllllll. :D It came to my mind like just know so Bam. THANKS ALOT :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

May 25, 2015 - 19:59 lo;l that sakura tree thing :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 25, 2015 - 20:00 Oh! Anime inspired and prolly that explains alot :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

May 25, 2015 - 20:01 lol in a split second.. no second thoughts :P
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 26, 2015 - 10:55 Haha. :3
PenFairy

PenFairy

May 26, 2015 - 03:00 I agree!! This is a really beautiful poem Mahobee!!!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 26, 2015 - 10:55 Thank you so much, fairy :3
SuzumeDaiki

SuzumeDaiki

May 25, 2015 - 20:12 AMAZING!!! I was taken aback bout how beautifully u wrote it!!!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 25, 2015 - 20:59 Thanks a lot. :D
Dravench

Dravench

May 26, 2015 - 03:45 I LOVE EVERY WORD. If this isn't poetic, I don't know WHAT is. Beautifully written!! Each word woven with a sprinkle of magic :D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 26, 2015 - 10:56 Hey thank you so much!!!! Your comment made my day :'D
Icariaat

Icariaat

May 26, 2015 - 05:30 Wow I love your style, amazing poem
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 26, 2015 - 10:57 Hey thanks for the lovely comment. :D
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

May 26, 2015 - 09:20 Maham , This poem is so beautiful ...!!! I loved it . May god bless you , Creative girl :P
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 26, 2015 - 10:57 Vish!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!! :3
abbywookie

abbywookie

May 27, 2015 - 14:12 this is BEAUUUUTIFUL, sakura girl :) :) :) loving it
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 27, 2015 - 21:02 Thank you so much, Abby :'D Lol sakura girl. Haha. Thx :3
manelyn

manelyn

May 29, 2015 - 05:25 Seems like you've got some inspiration there Mahoobee :D Really beautiful! My favorite so far :))
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 29, 2015 - 07:39 Well, Maybe :D Thank you so much, Manelyn. :D (yay)
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.

Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.

July 1, 2015 - 00:37 I liked the sakura thing, so it was set in Japan?
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 1, 2015 - 01:47 Yeah!! I love Japan for many various reasons :"D
celestialmind

celestialmind

July 15, 2015 - 21:53 This is so beautiful a poem, I'm telling you Mahobee :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 21:57 Thank you so much!!!!!! :D
celestialmind

celestialmind

July 15, 2015 - 22:12 You are welcome :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 16, 2015 - 01:52 Hehe. ;F
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 29, 2015 - 13:12 haha i agree with your profile xD
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 29, 2015 - 15:01 Hehe, thx :D

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