Sunrise thoughts

by Mahoobee
Let the morning sweep in,

It's been so long,

Since everything was opposite the wrong.

Thinking thoughts in my head,

I wondered about the things they said.

About how my life was a mess.

And I was like a broken leaf,

Unlike the rest.

Magic words stuck inside my throat.

Wet irises filled with rosy soap.

I chanted the words,

To let them catch the wind,

but like always,

They turn to past.

And I rewind.

I catch the tears as they fall,

Gazing indifferently to the ever changing glow.

Of the colours before the dawn.

How many times,

Have I stayed awake all through the night.

Counting my scars instead of sheep.

It's foul to do such things,

Just to fall into a dreamless sleep.

It's not like I am going to pray for a better day.

Or for some friends,

I'm not that eager to fill up,

My empty gums.

I am even fine with empty spaces.

Loneliness has it's own fun.

So I'll just watch the sun rise.

And blue turn to yellow.

Night suite changed to uniform

And sorrow turns to hello.

Panic hearts turns to calm.

While I sit,

Curled up in my blanket.

And watch this plastic world.

Turns to a two faced planet.

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Mahoobee (14-06-15)

Shock, shock. I got over my writers block and geez, it's a bit too late to join the challenge. *pouts*

I have written a poem and send it to be published in a magazine. So wish me luck guys. I have taken a lot of courage to swallow my nervous cells.

Comment and calm me down :D I need loads of inspiration.

Good luck my friends on the results of the challenge. :D
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MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 14, 2015 - 18:54 Neko likes ur writings as always (。・ω・。)ノ♡
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 18:55 Fukukukukuku. N bee likes your emojis.
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

July 14, 2015 - 18:56 High five sista! ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 18:58 High five sista! ( 。・_・。)人(。・_・。 )
samewriter

samewriter

July 14, 2015 - 18:56 aye, sad but way very lovely the masochist me, want to count those scars with you
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 18:57 You know how kind of you. :D Thanks for your lovely comment. :D
samewriter

samewriter

July 14, 2015 - 19:00 you are very welcome Mahobee Keep the inspiration around. Don't let them wander, hahaha.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:01 Haha. Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it. I'll hold onto it like gum. Tehehehe. :D
nupur27

nupur27

July 14, 2015 - 19:04 Awesome would be an understatement!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:06 Thank youuuuu so much :D As well as for the upvote :D
SuzumeDaiki

SuzumeDaiki

July 14, 2015 - 19:04 I love it so very much. Keep on writing, mahoobee. Your writing rock. :3
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:07 Thank you so much!!! As well as for the upvote :D
sanaryamni

sanaryamni

July 14, 2015 - 19:12 keep at it mahobee
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:14 Thx a lot for your support. :D As well as for the upvote :)
sanaryamni

sanaryamni

July 14, 2015 - 19:14 welcome- where you from?
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:15 I'm from Pakistan :D you?
sanaryamni

sanaryamni

July 14, 2015 - 19:16 haha! INDIA!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:16 Woah! Hi there neighbour ;D
sanaryamni

sanaryamni

July 14, 2015 - 19:24 hi there neighbor dear! write hard! what's your age, what do you do?
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 19:27 Well, I just turned 17 :D I'm going to go to college now. :) Engg student :3
neonip

neonip

July 14, 2015 - 19:46 so beautiful, *Tearing inside
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 20:36 Haha. Thanks a lot, mate. :D
sanaryamni

sanaryamni

July 14, 2015 - 19:51 hmm. my daughter is a civil engineer in bombay and my son is a doctor in delhi. take care, bye.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 20:35 That's cool. :D You too. Bye bye :)
abbywookie

abbywookie

July 15, 2015 - 11:40 you're a freakin awesome and brilliant and impeccable and blah blah poet, Maham, :D and good luck with the magazine stuff! :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 13:50 Haha. Thank youuu so much, Abby. Your comment made my day. :D Thanks a lot. :'D
abbywookie

abbywookie

July 15, 2015 - 15:09 anytime :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 22:01 Thanks again :']
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 15, 2015 - 12:34 gee im late xD ppl said it all before i could even open my mouth and this sucks *pouts :/ anyhow i cant believe how u manage inserting all that feels and emotions in your words.. prolly the best from you,, loved it n keep up... :D and yea im sure theyll publish your poem.. just hold your head high.. by the way, what magazine?? :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 13:52 Oh!!! Thanks a lot, manahil. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks again. :D It's a magazine related to PAF. :3
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Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 13:53 Pakistan air force. :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

July 15, 2015 - 13:53 i see.. cool
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 13:54 Thanks. :3
Nonopha

Nonopha

July 15, 2015 - 14:34 This is very beautiful, had me in tears <3
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 15, 2015 - 22:01 Oh don't sniff :3 Thanks a lot. :D
PenFairy

PenFairy

July 16, 2015 - 06:15 Great work! Keep it up! Good luck... It has to be published!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 16, 2015 - 10:44 Thanks a lot, penfairy. :D As well as for the upvote :3
Nightingale

Nightingale

July 16, 2015 - 20:20 Your poem can be turned into a song! Nice one. ATB for the Mag!:-)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 16, 2015 - 20:22 Thank youuuu so much!!!!!! :') Thanks again and I hoped :D
Nightingale

Nightingale

July 16, 2015 - 20:52 :-) Pleasure.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 16, 2015 - 20:52 ;D
Bakhtawar Shaikh

Bakhtawar Shaikh

July 18, 2015 - 06:32 It's a beautiful poem and has an effect on the reader :) Loved it!!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 18, 2015 - 06:42 Thanks a lot, sist a ;)
Artemis Stone

Artemis Stone

November 13, 2016 - 08:04 Gave me tears. Amazingly written!!!

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