Snow Moon

by Mahoobee
Snow flakes,
Travelled through the night.
Looking for someone new.
Expectedly,
They landed in my heart.

Fear

The silence went bright.
Tossing and turning.
The unease in my chest.
All this utmost fear,
Of hating the thought of being trapped,
Inside someone else heart.

Fear

I filled my bathtub,
with water from the moons tears.
And sprinkled sugar,
From the stars that lost their sweetness,
When they went dark.

Fear

Then.
I spend hours in the bathtub,
And wrote stories,
about my greatest fear.
Disgusted and feeling sorry,
I would tear
All the pages,
Written in someone else blood.

Fear

Outside my window,
The people roamed the other worlds.
They knocked at my door,
Expecting to much from my soul.

Fear.

Running and bumping into my ghosts,
I would say hi to them.
They hover over my head,
Telling me to go to sleep.
I would tell them to go,
I have lost interest in my fake dreams.

Fear.

They asked me,
"Is there something that haunts you?
I smiled,
I fear people expecting to much from me.
They don't realise.
That I am just a moon,
Lightless and clean.

With poems as my asylum.
In my world,
No one goes or comes.
I am just a soul,
with glass for eyes.

And dreams that comes out to be,
Snow covered Lies.

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Mahoobee (01-08-15)

My name is Maham which means "Our Moon" hinting towards moon and my fears I wrote this.

I hope I was welcomed. My first time in entering in a competition here so look after me.

----Hope you guys like it. *scared * ;D
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Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

August 1, 2015 - 19:56 You don't need to get scared cos this is awesome I meant like you said your name means the moon and you have written something wonderful with your imagination . This is really wonderful . All the best
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 19:57 Ah!! Thank you so much, vish. Thanks sis!! :D
nupur27

nupur27

August 1, 2015 - 19:58 First to upvote!!! Yeaaiii yeeaai yeeaiiii!!! I was so excited to see ur poem!! Awesome will surely be an understatement!!!! As ppl ought to understand!!! That you are moon to just guide and not the way, they want you to light!! Loved the poem The real fear The emotion The cover pic!!! Ofc by milachan!! Hahhaa But though I totally totally loved it!!!!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 20:01 Thankest, Nur!!! I am so glad you like it hehe thanks again :D
nupur27

nupur27

August 1, 2015 - 20:02 My pleasurest mahooooo!!!!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 20:02 Haha hehe yay~
SuzumeDaiki

SuzumeDaiki

August 1, 2015 - 20:03 Amazing! It looks more like a song. And it's beautiful. Good luck.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 20:04 Thanks dai-chan!!! It means a lot. :)
MilaChaNn

MilaChaNn

August 1, 2015 - 20:11 Nekooooo lovessssssss it ❤
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 1, 2015 - 20:12 I know lol :3
rekhanshiraghava

rekhanshiraghava

August 2, 2015 - 04:51 Upvote.... yaaa.... Adding to favourite... yessss ofcourse. . But all this is too little. Your work is just awesome, beautiful poem, super classic. . Loved it the most..... Maho, u r an amazing poet... great job...
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 2, 2015 - 09:11 Thank youuu so much. It means a lot here. :D
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

August 2, 2015 - 05:01 A very beautiful theme for a poem.But I dont want it related it with fear.such beautiful lines. But fear lurks.that is a fact contained in your verses.well done friend.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 2, 2015 - 09:11 Thanks a lot, mate. :D
celestialmind

celestialmind

August 2, 2015 - 12:41 I knew I'd love your poem... I love it! U r so creative I can't help but look forward to reading more from u :) . Wishing u the very best!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 2, 2015 - 18:12 Thank you so much!! I appreciate it. ;D
PriM

PriM

August 2, 2015 - 12:48 Loveee Loveee!!!Good luck!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 2, 2015 - 18:14 Thank you so much!! :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 2, 2015 - 12:52 this is prolly ur bestest shot mahooo.. u must win lolol :D im cheering back on ya :'D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:12 Oh thank you so much :D
P'yonce Knowmore

P'yonce Knowmore

August 2, 2015 - 12:58 Well written and expressed... beautiful structure.. I llove it
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:12 Thx a lot, mate :D
koyaai

koyaai

August 2, 2015 - 14:58 Solid piece! Just take time to read it again for some minor errors and it's good to go. My only concern is that maybe the imagery gets confusing towards the end. Again, maybe it's just me. It felt like cramming too many colors in a 24-pack box of crayons. But my view might change if I decide to read this again tomorrow. haha
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:10 Haha. Thx for a useful tip. :D
manelyn

manelyn

August 2, 2015 - 15:38 I didn't know it's your first time to join the competition Maham :) but then congratulations, you finally had the chance to share your talent with those poems of yours!wishing you all the luck!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 2, 2015 - 18:14 Thank you so much!! :D
lizjay

lizjay

August 3, 2015 - 09:39 This is awesome, i liked it and your writing is great as well...am getting inspired because i have passion for this.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 3, 2015 - 09:44 Thank you so much. :D I am glad i was able to inspire you :D
ezzah

ezzah

August 3, 2015 - 10:58 "I fear people expecting too much from me" so true!! Good job dude♥
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:13 Thx a lot, :3
abbywookie

abbywookie

August 3, 2015 - 14:00 wow, mahoopotter this really should win. your poems are always so beautiful and mahoo-style. this one is impeccable. :D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:11 Thank you so much Abby :D
Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

August 3, 2015 - 15:05 gawd im reading it like for the 3rd time.. its just so good :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:13 Oh thank you so much. U made my day, mate. :3
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Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:12 Thx thx thx a lot :D
samewriter

samewriter

August 3, 2015 - 16:43 One should be afraid those who expect too much, annoyed as well. This is great piece Mahobee. :D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:10 Thx a lot same :D
mackdonnut

mackdonnut

August 4, 2015 - 05:29 nice one.....it has texture and complexity if not totally read by heart.....
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:09 Thank you so much :D
Nightingale

Nightingale

August 4, 2015 - 17:32 Awesome, Maham. It had varied shades of fear! Good luck. :-)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 10:09 Thanks a lot, mate :D
abbywookie

abbywookie

August 5, 2015 - 13:56 YAYYYYYYY MAHAM I KNEW YOU'D MAKE IT :D CONGRATS!! WOOOOO YEAH IM THE FIRST ONE =) you so deserve this! :)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 5, 2015 - 13:57 What is happening?
abbywookie

abbywookie

August 5, 2015 - 13:57 im congratulating you in advance lol :D hahahaha
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 6, 2015 - 10:20 Haha thank you so much. :*)
DavidBokolo

DavidBokolo

August 5, 2015 - 17:12 Did I hear you say, your first time in competition. and you won Wao! that's great, Congrat. M
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

August 6, 2015 - 10:21 Haha. Thanks a lot, David . :D
purpletears

purpletears

May 5, 2016 - 15:41 So beautiful, my friend

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