July 5, 2016
Smitten
Romantic poem
Smitten
by LUIS K.She ambushed me
Before i had the chance
To bring up the wall
Shield mine heart
From the onslaught
Of that ecstatic
Feeling of love
In no time
I was tossing
And turning a prisoner
Of them flames of love
Consumed by desire
Consumed by bliss
Smitten to bits by love
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2 COMMENTS
Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr.
July 8, 2016 - 13:25 How romantic!LUIS K.
July 12, 2016 - 08:06 Thank you Lorenzo, for reading my poem and the nice comment.. ;-)