Mistake

by Mahoobee
It has been days.

Since we last met.

Outside the balcony, I sat.

And waited.

Day by day.

But you never showed up.

So I searched for comfort in your things.

Your sketches, paint tools and your blue cup

When you bid goodbye.

Nothing was left for me to do,

But look at the sky,

And search for the brightest star,

That will remind me of you.

Maybe, it will heal all my scars,

Which you left in my heart.

The rain pours down,

All my miseries,

Somewhere on your face.

I hope then,

It'll remind you,

What you did was a grave mistake.
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Manahill Naik

Manahill Naik

March 30, 2015 - 12:39 keep on writing maham.. loved it :P
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

March 31, 2015 - 22:09 ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з thanks alot ⌒.⌒
Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

April 1, 2015 - 17:06 your poems gives inspirations . i loved it keep on writing it is blessed to you . bye for now
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 3, 2015 - 08:59 Thanks alot⌒.⌒
celestialmind

celestialmind

April 8, 2015 - 21:39 Your poem's captivated my thoughts...very nice though sad. Good work
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 9, 2015 - 11:03 @celestialmind Thank you so much. :)
Kazue Tsubasa

Kazue Tsubasa

April 16, 2015 - 12:48 Your poetry is as awesome as Tokyo Ghoul <3 Did you write based on TG or is it just a coincidence that you chose this image for the cover image?
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 17, 2015 - 21:38 I wrote it based on Tokyo ghoul root A. I mean I love touka x ken. Thanks alot. I'm glad someone knows about tg. ⌒.⌒
Shahrukh

Shahrukh

May 3, 2015 - 18:13 Awesome Hope fie dont find mistakes
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 3, 2015 - 19:39 Thank you so much. :D Why would he? Even if he does, He would only help me. :D
Shahrukh

Shahrukh

May 6, 2015 - 01:34 Yeah of coarse
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 7, 2015 - 08:47 ^_^
goliathmalet

goliathmalet

May 21, 2015 - 18:11 wow, that was brilliant I love the way you used your words, and thank you for the comment on my story
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

May 21, 2015 - 19:12 Thank you so much. :D Your very welcome:D
purpletears

purpletears

June 22, 2015 - 15:23 Could feel the emotion in your poem... thanks for sharing it!
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 22, 2015 - 15:29 Thanks a lot for the comment and the up vote :D
purpletears

purpletears

June 22, 2015 - 15:43 You´re welcome :D
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

June 22, 2015 - 16:43 :D :D
sheelsdevi

sheelsdevi

July 14, 2015 - 12:27 That was one emotional piece.. beautiful.
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 14, 2015 - 12:38 Thank you so much :D

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