foolish friendship.

by tebogo kula
Once upon a time,two young boys named king and china met at dikubu primary school,they grew together from grade6 up untill grade 12..king is a very angered and impatient person,who always like to fight because of his anger,..china is very patient person,he hate fighting,but he is more interested in hurting and using girls...they both had different attitudes and life styles..they never bothered to help and encourage each other,all they could often do is to give each other compliments on negative things based on how many girls did china slept with or how many people did king beated or stabbed with a knife. As they grow,their life styles became worse.china managed to sleep with more than four girls within 24hours...king managed to defeat various groups of people alone,,taking their money for no good reason......they both saluted by people who lived like them,but clevers and victims always wished them wrong,they wished if they could pay for what they did. China came across to a beautiful lady called jane,he approached the chick and lied to her.he promised her love and future,,the poor chick agreed with china`s lies and eventually slept with him..few days after,she was supriced to receive a painful sms from china which says "its over,i got the taste of what i was looking for"...jane responded "oh ok!!!i actually enjoyed sharing my status with you.go get tasted"..china was then confused and stressed from what jane said..he went to the clinic to check as whether Jane meant what she said or not,and he found out that he is positive.His life started turned uop side down,he lost his hope about future and everything faded away ......his friend also injured a group of people badly with a knife,only one died and the rest was taken to hospital,he was take to prison...he attended the court of law alone.his victims where all in hospital and the other died..he was unfortunatetly imprisoned 15years for attampted murder,5years for assult and 30years for murder. All this was curses threw by their victims,and also served as god`s punishment.....they both realized their errors of life,but unfortunately it was too lake to turn back..their foolish friendship teared apart,each one of them experienced a pain others felt. China got better as time goes on,he recovered day by day untill he was able to walk out to the street.Hiv&Aids was exposed to those who knew the symptoms.....people started to live away fronm him,his fellows abandon him....he was wifeless and lonely....guiltiness was written all over his face.he cried when he meet with Jane along the street...'i am sorry was like a daily song to him,but no one wanted to listen to.........king was luckly released from prison before the given years..HE stayed in prison for 9years...he was forgotten byb everyone...loneliness was all around him,his future was gone into the dark-land....they bpth struggled to live better ever since.
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November 26, 2014 - 13:26 the idea is good and relevent to the writen piece...but it seems like you never checked your story before you publish it......

January 4, 2015 - 09:20 How could any of this be better stated? It coldun't.
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February 10, 2015 - 22:15 Thanks for the compliment..that serves as a courage to upgrade My moral in writing..anywy i'll also visit yours.
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February 18, 2015 - 04:07 nice story! keep it up!

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