Flawless

by Mahoobee
I'm quite amazed,

Of how flawlessly you were made.

And I,

Was just a cactus in your way.

I have counted all those days,

I yelled at you.

I cried for your sake.

I tried all those fake smiles.

They won't ever work on you.

And,

After walking million miles.

I realised your words.

They came to me,

Quite clearly.

Of how perfect you were supposed to be.

Yet,

I could see.

You have already deserted,

You, I and we.
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Vishnumayaa

Vishnumayaa

April 5, 2015 - 07:26 wow! its a touching poem .
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 8, 2015 - 11:42 Thanks.
abbywookie

abbywookie

April 18, 2015 - 15:41 Nice and sad at the same time :/ But I really love how you string the words together =)
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

April 18, 2015 - 16:00 Hey thanks alot ⌒.⌒
inshal786

inshal786

July 10, 2015 - 12:57 very lovely poem
Mahoobee

Mahoobee

July 10, 2015 - 13:00 Thank you so much :D

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