I made this poem to express my feelings, and I wanna shout to the whole world that I will never ever give up. no matter how hard the situation that I've encountered
A fat girl who got bullied, depressed finally got her life together for a year. And she finally proofed it to her best friend who always picked on her every single day about something that she just realised that day.
In each life rain must fall
There's joy and pain you can recall...
Is there happiness without her?
Her eyes, words, movement, costumes,everything gives me a wonderful happiness....
3 COMMENTS
manelyn
June 5, 2015 - 17:04 Except for some minor grammar issues, you really took me with the emotion in your poem. Whatever you are going through, you certainly can overcome it because of your spirit! Keep going and keep on writing... :)Icadz
June 6, 2015 - 03:54 Thank you, and God BlessManahill Naik
July 30, 2015 - 13:05 i completely agree with manelyn.. some minimal grammar probs but still u instilled loads of emotion in it :D keep up